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MuDvAyNe on Senses by lunar 30 Mar 2003, 1:19 PM
gr8 chat up line. aah, a love poem, i love you!!!
MuDvAyNe on The poemranker desk by lunar 30 Mar 2003, 1:18 PM
i love this beautiful work, just like your eyes, and yesi have seen them. just to scare you there
MuDvAyNe on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar 30 Mar 2003, 1:15 PM
i love your work, and i love you more, im gonna give you a huge hug. actuallyi wont cos ull get a restraining order :p but i wud if i cud
MuDvAyNe replying on Life by MuDvAyNe 30 Mar 2003, 1:06 PM
why thank you, maybe i should get some grattitude from saving you from the waterbomb on friday maybe?
razorgrin replying on Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin 30 Mar 2003, 12:58 PM
Yeah, I know. Anywho. "hank" is actually three people I've met. they are all alive and well. i think the DVDA one was fun.
lynnstratton on The Blooding by Mr Pig 30 Mar 2003, 9:42 AM
Simply superb.
lynnstratton on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30 Mar 2003, 9:36 AM
Why does he wipe them with a shoe-horne, which is used to ease the shoe onto the foote! I thought poem was ok, but an Gentleman should know for what his shoe-horne was created.
DurtKL on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus 30 Mar 2003, 8:05 AM
it's stupid
horus8 on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined 30 Mar 2003, 1:35 AM
and listening to the police, naturally, their greatest hits.
horus8 on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined 30 Mar 2003, 1:34 AM
You know that poetry's been bombed out when this piece gets the attention of all the greatest cynics at poem cranker, and me, at the crack of dawn, but low and behold it's still the witching hour here gentleman, and i'm cruising at high speeds on me new e mac. fuckers.
Lucifer on Drunk Satan by smlink84 29 Mar 2003, 8:27 PM
It's been a while since you've posted. If I may encourage you to write, I think most of the site would agree that we miss your nutty and sincere flair. When you write again let me know.
Frass on Conditional Sex by scitz 29 Mar 2003, 4:35 PM
Damn good, Sctz. As a recently divorced person, I sure as shite don't want to go through this.
Frass on Glare of Dawn by OneFingerAnswer 29 Mar 2003, 4:31 PM
Excellent, OFA; especially 'Staring down the future'. The appropriate strewing of a smattering of commas will help your meaning.
Fear of Garbage on Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin 29 Mar 2003, 4:13 PM
your other perversions are much better.
horus8 on Distant at best by Crakyamuni 29 Mar 2003, 3:32 PM
Mr. Hand.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom 29 Mar 2003, 2:01 PM
Thank you very much The Caps. are just the first center and last word. I'll give it a title when I finish it but I like your Idea.
OneFingerAnswer on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom 29 Mar 2003, 1:02 PM
Line 4: absolutely Line 7: Seems kind of muddled. Maybe "As I stand in the raging storm on what was once a bright and sunny day" Line 8: If it's stormy it's not really empty. Maybe "stormy and gray" (Or synonymous words to avoid repetition) I don't understand some of the words you choose to capitalize. For a title, "Turbulence" ?
maffy on Conditional Sex by scitz 29 Mar 2003, 10:11 AM
WORTH AN 8, GO SEE A DOCTOR
JackCrawley on Is This Love by intheailse 29 Mar 2003, 8:44 AM
Did you just try to rhyme "fire" with "time"? Good Lord. The only thing worse than a poem that insists on rhyming is a poem that insists on rhyming and fails.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Guitar Lesson by Dancer 29 Mar 2003, 8:06 AM
Good Times, Good Times