thepinkbunnyofdoom
on affection wasted by milkymilk
27 Jan 2003, 2:11 PM
I'm not one to cry but my eyes got a little misty reading that. I've been in that boat too.
Very original retelling of Jason and the Argonauts. That happens to be one of my favorite stories in greek mythology so I Voted it a ten.
Confusing as those "sound of one hand clapping" type questions but i like the 2nd and 3rd lines.
This poem is all over the place. A "renaissance of dust", if you will? 7.
haha... an office cup. one of the cone ones or the ones that slightly resemble a decent glass?
You have a good flow and i like the way you used the phoenix
I like it
Very Good Description Of Feelings.
I don't agree with nentwined here.
This is probably the best sept 11th organic attempt at lucid poetics yet..here, that is..why? because it almost isn't..get it? think about that
Finished in a rush, but i rather enjoyed how it started, and the wrenchings you applied to some of your articulationso
I would.
fool
average, sorry i just dont feel anytihng from this
That's pretty funny. Coming from you.
MuDvAyNe
on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar
27 Jan 2003, 10:26 AM
Deep, full of meaning, wow, brilliant
yeh, wonderful poem, 10! 10! 10! and actually holds a lot of truth
lovely, although a can think of an adjustment for me, "love" for him would be my number 1 as im so lonely and without love. by the way, u single? ;)
I think I need more context for this. as it, it seems pointlessly haphazard/random.