nentwined
on Melancholy Tale by aperfecttool77
27 Jan 2003, 10:00 AM
why did I read this? well, I didn't: I stopped at the trite questions.
doesn't do it for me. too klunky.
bravo. :)
well, I must say I appreciate the 8. I wouldn't mind posting more, myself, but it's rare that I actually have anything that I think might have a chance at being interesting to say. :)
I wish you'd post more. more more MORE I SAY!
aha, but it's really yesterday's. no dates on the "most recent" really makes things a bit surreal.
but thank you muchly just the same. :) [gobbles the 7 happily]
todays best
In the Welsh climate my hair just gets wet. Oh for some ice and snow!
Disjointed, but nice.
I was reading random poetry
When suddenly one night
I came upon the dumbest poem
That ever caught my sight
Some idiot just prattled on
and made no sense at all
He thought it funny to write rhymes
about hair and genitals.
He lead me down the garden path
through a churchyard to a cellar
He thought with laughter, I would collapse
To read how he stroked his 'fella'
Well let me tell you one last time
I'm sick and tired of reading
Of self abuse and penis juice
And auto-inflicted beatings
you boys are dumb
Who speak of bums
And Aids and prawns and brownings
Stay away, go and get laid
You're in serious need of mounting
I'm bored of being victimized by your manipulation
Practice is the proven cure
For pre-mature ejaculation.
It's obvious your cock is small
No 'Bishop' as you claim
your just some stunted acolyte
You should be ashamed.
"It didn't look like the look of it," problem here.
otherwise quite creative..hear that flamenboring? creative..quite. see the difference? good.
very creative? If creativity could be bottled..your bottle would be a paper office cup.
haha
i guess if i was into the lovey-dovey mushy poetry i would have given it a better rating. but honestly. give it up... get drunk and forget about it
Very creative, I like it
When horus was putting his father osiris back together...he purposely lost the penis..changing the universe forever. Need as dust pan?<
This is to poetry what the blue lagoon was to cinema?
never said it was bad
heh yeah fuck I wrote the fucker after I'd snorted a fuck load of bad fucking shit fuck
not sure what to say to this