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INTRANSIT replying on Returning by INTRANSIT 7 Nov 2002, 6:09 AM
Question: Did you see the 1st draft before all the comments?
cleverdevice on Dead Poets' Society (Joke) by Yardbird 7 Nov 2002, 6:08 AM
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAA! It rocks! Here is a philosophy poem. (The two are iinexplicably entwined) Ever heard of the solipsism campaign for support?
cleverdevice on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman 7 Nov 2002, 6:05 AM
Brilliant! This should be the goddam best poem! Its teenage life.
INTRANSIT replying on Returning by INTRANSIT 7 Nov 2002, 6:05 AM
Wow! Feed back a go-go! Hang on. Gotta think a minute.
INTRANSIT replying on Returning by INTRANSIT 7 Nov 2002, 6:03 AM
Ok I did some shuffeling, some deletions but I replaced the "tortured" line. It feels better even to me now. Your opinion?
Christof on Returning by INTRANSIT 7 Nov 2002, 6:02 AM
I can see the Odysseus thing - allt he sailing and beacon images. I think i would finish after 'again, safe', although 'throwing my ribs/ at her feet' is good'. Perhaps hold that over for a separate poem entirely? It find this last stanza difficult because i appreciate why you want those emotions there, and it does complicate your homecoming in an interesting way, but I think your expression is just too fevered.
cleverdevice on Longing by deadstar 7 Nov 2002, 6:01 AM
Nice
Yardbird replying on Clerihews (here you go, Nicholas Jones!) by Yardbird 7 Nov 2002, 6:00 AM
A clerihew is a two-lined poem, the first being someone's name, the second being a (witty) rhyme with that name. Hope that clears things up - have a go yourself, 'tis very amusing!!!
deadstar on "turd to yo mutha" daywalker shittalker by Bachus 7 Nov 2002, 5:54 AM
This is shite. I like Wesley's acting, you should see Passenger 57
deadstar on one word by Blade 7 Nov 2002, 5:51 AM
Oh dear
deadstar on Flamin Monkey's by Blade 7 Nov 2002, 5:48 AM
Brilliant, I needed a laugh and you completely satisfied my warped humour.Just the thought of a monkey with a flamethrower...
Tascobar replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria 7 Nov 2002, 5:42 AM
Someone get this man a dictionary - please. And grammar tuition would also not go amiss.
Tascobar on boy girl by little_angel_maria 7 Nov 2002, 5:39 AM
One of your better efforts. 3.
Tascobar on I remenber by little_angel_maria 7 Nov 2002, 5:16 AM
Rubbish. 0. If your Dad "holves" you, it sounds as though he should be reported to the relevant authorities. Jesus, your poems' ratings are beginning to resemble binary code.
Yardbird replying on Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7 Nov 2002, 4:56 AM
Damn right I am.
Nicholas Jones on Emotionless by Roisin 7 Nov 2002, 4:53 AM
Nice. You combine the haiku with concrete poetry - the poem is jagged because of the lenght of the middle line.
Nicholas Jones on Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi 7 Nov 2002, 4:52 AM
Ezra would have been proud. The dirty fascist.
Nicholas Jones on Ulrika-ka-ka (In Utero, track 4) by Tascobar 7 Nov 2002, 4:44 AM
Nice. But I don't get the Nirvana reference.
Nicholas Jones on Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom 7 Nov 2002, 4:37 AM
There once was a strange man called George Who from nowhere could fashion a war He won notoriety And caused much hilarity His words he was forced to disgorge.
Nicholas Jones on Some Things by Christof 7 Nov 2002, 4:21 AM
I'm sat in a library now. Books are very sensual things. Things are not as they appear to be. I particularly like the contrast between the wholesomeness of bridge and baking and the wickedness of Ms Nin.