Re: Prayer For The Church by sliver	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.7	28-Apr-05/8:27 PM
What's outrageous? Papal praise is What's disgusting? Condom bustin' What's outrageous? Celebate priests is What's forbidden? alter boy smitten What do we want? Condoms! When do we want 'em? Now!
Re: Returning by Dovina	sliver 207.200.116.130	28-Apr-05/8:12 PM
If only more of us would open the doors of our minds. I enjoyed the first stanza very much.The rest wasn't bad, ...
Re: Lost key for a hall-closet by zodiac	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.7	28-Apr-05/8:09 PM
Loved this part "Then she's tucked, like laundry wearing rumpled laundry, in the old crotchless, scallops..." I got the sexual undertone, though not the way you intended it; I was thinking the key was a metaphor for some masturbation tool at the end.
Re: L'Étoile by Shardik	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.7	28-Apr-05/8:04 PM
yes quite
Re: a comment on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy	sliver 207.200.116.197	28-Apr-05/8:03 PM
Sometimes it's forced upon you.
Re: The Resilient Woman by Joe-joe	sliver 207.200.116.130	28-Apr-05/8:02 PM
What is a ship? Alex
Re: Fingers Are Soldiers by somemorepoetry	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.7	28-Apr-05/7:59 PM
fine writing
Re: Hanging Gallows by Hadasl	sliver 207.200.116.130	28-Apr-05/7:57 PM
What does Zodiac know? I like it.
Re: a comment on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.7	28-Apr-05/7:56 PM
I don't take sides.
Re: The promise by thepinkbunnyofdoom	sliver 207.200.116.130	28-Apr-05/7:54 PM
The first stanza reminds me of my friend Skip, "Stay out of my mind, there's things in there i don't want you to know." Good visuals.
Re: FREAKIN by celticskatermatt1	sliver 207.200.116.130	28-Apr-05/7:52 PM
Only because you misspelled cello
Re: Untitled by http://mulberryfairy	sliver 207.200.116.130	28-Apr-05/7:50 PM
And with that he's gone. Now you're changing sides?
Re: In the aspens by sliver	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.7	28-Apr-05/7:47 PM
nice. I like "We unwittingly spit on the history Of souls stained like ours"
Re: FREAKIN by celticskatermatt1	http://mulberryfairy 216.195.165.7	28-Apr-05/7:39 PM
marshmallows when spelled correctly can still rhyme with cellos
Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	nentwined 64.60.192.130	28-Apr-05/2:40 PM
Your rendition of this continues to haunt me.
Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.58	28-Apr-05/2:39 PM
I just want to reiterate my total, total horror at this poeme. I've seen so many unbelievably sick things on the internet that I don't understand how I can feel so morally violated by what is, when you get down to it, a description of ordinary, unkinky, consensual sex between consenting adults. I think it's because I keep imagining Rockmage peeping out from a closet to watch, his beard all a-quiver. -10-
Re: a comment on Censor by nentwined	sliver 205.188.117.71	28-Apr-05/12:26 PM
It would work alot better if you could roll your word endings down, if you know what I mean. It would show how your thoughts have a tendency to droop at times.
Re: a comment on Censor by nentwined	nentwined 64.60.192.130	28-Apr-05/12:23 PM
Cool. =) Thanks.
Re: a comment on Censor by nentwined	sliver 205.188.117.71	28-Apr-05/12:23 PM
It does get the point acrost better now tho'. Some times it's like that.
Re: a comment on Censor by nentwined	<~> 167.206.181.179	28-Apr-05/12:21 PM
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