Re: a comment on Utensils of creation by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	18-Apr-05/2:14 AM
"I don't understand what this point's saying. Do you mean that you've almost graduated high school? I got a 1580 on the SAT; what did you get?" Wow you really have got the intention to save the world!!!!!!
Re: a comment on Utensils of creation by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	18-Apr-05/2:03 AM
Nice try, failed misserably (sorry for spelling mistakes)
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	18-Apr-05/1:57 AM
Thankyou for your usefull insight, I hope it wil help me grow within poetry, in fact I thank all you people who had the effort to comment.
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	18-Apr-05/1:54 AM
Shutup Goad you fu*kin idiot
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	18-Apr-05/1:52 AM
Very good, glad you can find the best in people
Re: a comment on A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	18-Apr-05/1:10 AM
Thanks.
Re: A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere	lastobelus 80.132.247.133	17-Apr-05/6:03 PM
"So what is this thrumming coin on the strand?" is very nice.
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.16.165	17-Apr-05/3:50 PM
Your mo*nface is huge, white and round. Q: What do you mean you can "be more flexible without it"? A: You're cr*p at grammar, so you've invented a reason why it's ok to be cr*p. You can only be "more flexible" without grammar if you ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT THE F*CK YOU ARE DOING. If you were to take up fishing, you'd feel you could be "more flexible without the pole". Ironically the pole is the most flexible thing in fishing, aside from your limp cock which hasn't been fully deployed since Grandma bit a chunk off during a rather rowdy episode of "Countdown."
Re: The Incubation by oneglove	Ranger 131.251.0.55	17-Apr-05/1:10 PM
Glorious
Re: the Dreamer by darylchew	Ranger 131.251.0.55	17-Apr-05/1:08 PM
I guarantee people on this highly-accommodating site will slate this. Make it humorous and you might convert them. Perhaps after the 'will he ever act' you could put something like 'will he remember to breathe?' or maybe 'will he contract AIDS?' (although the answer to that seems quite obvious to me). It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	Ranger 131.251.0.55	17-Apr-05/1:03 PM
I've often been mildly curious as to what NASDAQ means, but not nearly enough so that I bothered to find out. Ah, the power of acronyms. Also, I feel a need to express my rage at the uselessness of this disk, upon whose digital memory I inscribed my latest masterpieces, and whose incompatibility with my computer was almost predictible enough to be amusing. Almost.
Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey	Ranger 131.251.0.55	17-Apr-05/12:59 PM
Preach my pain also, oh how I long for those youthful days too. I appreciate this. 9
Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	17-Apr-05/12:58 PM
Isn't NASDAQ high enough?! lol!!!
Re: We Were Burnouts by jessicazee	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	17-Apr-05/12:56 PM
I like it but I can't seem to make the dead mans curve in it. I may be too slow at the wheel today.
Re: The Layer of Black by emilyowey	Ranger 131.251.0.55	17-Apr-05/12:55 PM
As a student I feel obliged to be wracked with guilt at not being black, impoverished or in prison (or any combination thereof)
Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	Ranger 131.251.0.55	17-Apr-05/12:53 PM
Lovely, I particularly liked the fountain and the exchange of stone to grass. The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
Re: Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	17-Apr-05/12:49 PM
I actually get the feeling that it's a small boy watching his older brother with a pencil and paper while he himself draws with a crayon next to him, thinking about how the future will/might unfold. Both boys are young 6/8 maybe. I really like this. upgraded.
Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	17-Apr-05/12:39 PM
Does Birmingham AL. actually get a "winter"? i think not. I said it was EARLY. clean your glasses.
Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone	Goad 80.132.241.75	17-Apr-05/10:55 AM
A perfectly laid trap, neatly snaring the obvious prey. In 9 minutes, lolololol. I doff my fez & scratch my bald spot to you sir.
Re: a comment on Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina	richa 81.178.223.135	17-Apr-05/10:54 AM
and what of mock indignation? Is your mock indignation trivial in comparison to that which has gone before or can you rightly be termed a mock indignator.