poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Dovina (4021-4040) and replies

Comments byDovina, 4021–4040 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Cutting The Ropes by darylchew 22 Oct 2004, 8:58 PM
If you love something, let it go. If it returns, it's yours. If not, it never was.
on From Then Till Now by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Oct 2004, 8:53 PM
From then til now, God has died and dreaming of sex with no hangups is his replacement. And the cow jumped over the moon.
replying on A Better God by Dovina 22 Oct 2004, 11:34 AM
And if it were, would you still be an atheist?
replying on A Better God by Dovina 22 Oct 2004, 11:33 AM
You made the same comment on my last poem, "A Lovely Cog." The one before that, “To Leave a Trace,” talks of the written records we leave after our deaths. And before that, “Archivist of Emotion.” By God, you’re right, I am a librarian. Thank you.
replying on Lufituaeb by Phaiyne 22 Oct 2004, 11:20 AM
Yes, I thought so,and I agree, but it sounds arrogant.
replying on GODDESS by jroday 21 Oct 2004, 2:51 PM
You said something similar after you deleted my comment on your poem a couple of weeks ago. I guess that's enough commenting.
on Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom 21 Oct 2004, 1:39 PM
I thought you were above this sort of thing.
on Lufituaeb by Phaiyne 21 Oct 2004, 1:30 PM
Arogant
on Wasted Life by calilegzzz 21 Oct 2004, 1:26 PM
This is quite well written, though too often misspelled.
on Zipmark'd by fevriere 21 Oct 2004, 1:19 PM
It's better now, but why do you split "slippery?" And "your self allclothed" adds nothing more than "yourself all clothed."
on Cutting The Ropes by darylchew 21 Oct 2004, 1:12 PM
I see the real me in you - paraphrased, and perhaps the best definition of love. The ropes do not seem to follow from the opening as if a step is missing.
on Women by Bakar 21 Oct 2004, 12:54 PM
Ah, not true, my good sir. You find not because you seek not.
replying on BLOBBY FUN"!** by MR Blobby 20 Oct 2004, 1:48 PM
No, you can send it to the email listed on my Poemranker homepage.
replying on A Lovely Cog by Dovina 20 Oct 2004, 1:41 PM
I'll answer your question when you finally tell us what that word means.
replying on A Lovely Cog by Dovina 20 Oct 2004, 1:39 PM
It's not a riddle really. Have you ever tried to love a factso, instructable, working fool.
replying on To Leave a Trace by Dovina 19 Oct 2004, 5:35 PM
Wrong and bland
such a terrible curse.
I suppose, in addition,
I have told and not shown.
on the victory by oneglove 19 Oct 2004, 5:19 PM
I wonder why you break rhythm in the last three lines.

I weep with joy
for Christ has conquered

As a tree delivered
Him to hades
now a tree releases
me from bondage

Just a thought.
on Unseen Death by Fire_is_cool 19 Oct 2004, 2:18 PM
A short story with too many "then"s and commas, Not a poem.
on Unbalancing Act by MacFrantic 19 Oct 2004, 12:46 PM
"often crazy in the head" about sums it up.
on BLOBBY FUN"!** by MR Blobby 19 Oct 2004, 12:43 PM
Nursery rhyme madness. Why? They are mad enough as is.