on Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Oct 2004, 9:05 PM
Let down.
replying on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper
16 Oct 2004, 8:54 PM
Also,this Meta-ku, as you call it, certainly does deserve the zero you've given it, but just because you couldn't wash your dirty little mouth out for 2 seconds to say "this sucked", I'll give it a 10, just out of spite.
replying on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper
16 Oct 2004, 8:49 PM
1. I probably should take it upon myself to actually know what it is I'm writing, or attempting to write.
2. I've no male genitalia with which to "funnel".
3. I live in the U.S. of A. and one of the beautiful things about it is the privaledge to do whatever the hell I want.
2. I've no male genitalia with which to "funnel".
3. I live in the U.S. of A. and one of the beautiful things about it is the privaledge to do whatever the hell I want.
on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper
16 Oct 2004, 8:13 PM
I really, really hate Haiku's. This is my first one ever. Tell me, public, does this Haiku pass as standable?
on the monster by oneglove
16 Oct 2004, 8:08 PM
If only God took time from his "busy" schedule to read. :) I like it.
on Yeah, Maybe by Blindpoetry
16 Oct 2004, 7:58 PM
You could call this one a lyrical too, no? Yea, I'd buy this single.
on Archivist of Emotion by Dovina
16 Oct 2004, 7:55 PM
Hah, I like the title most of all. -9-
on Fast Dreams by cuddlytiger17
16 Oct 2004, 7:52 PM
I love a good rhyming scheme :)
replying on Damn you, Feeling. by Rollsoftoiletpaper
16 Oct 2004, 7:49 PM
16. (junior in HS)
But with all the drama, it seems I should be older.
But with all the drama, it seems I should be older.
on Youth by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Oct 2004, 5:27 PM
Dig it.
replying on Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper
13 Oct 2004, 7:41 PM
Yea, it was written about an sexually abusive father. What would you suggest to fix the line?
P.S. Thanks :D
P.S. Thanks :D
replying on A Reflective Window by lukehanney
10 Oct 2004, 8:05 AM
I agree, I'm usually not a fan of long poems but this was certainly worth reading twice.
on Feast On Me by cuddlytiger17
10 Oct 2004, 7:53 AM
What is a "pimple" anyways? I mean, what makes it different from free verse, etc.?
on Cast Iron Coffin by D. $ Fontera
10 Oct 2004, 7:51 AM
Interesting.
replying on Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper
10 Oct 2004, 7:45 AM
Oh yea, thanks, I'll fix that.