on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2006, 1:04 AM
Stephen, you're pathetic. When will you ever stop.
on Gracy (An ode to my greyhound) by mindsigns
10 Aug 2006, 4:19 AM
Could have been better.
on 1a. Awaken by A db C
10 Aug 2006, 6:09 AM
I've read this a couple of times... but I feel this has to be presented better. You have good material, but somehow I don't find it very appealing.
And P.S. welcome to Poemranker. Enjoy.
And P.S. welcome to Poemranker. Enjoy.
on The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina
18 Aug 2006, 9:57 AM
Very imaginative. Obedient to rules,
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
accurate in every respect,
shadows move under cars,
lurk in alleys,......
on Visiting My Heart by drnick
18 Aug 2006, 10:04 AM
Cooool. You gave me an eerie feeling reading this. Somehow I felt like vampire was about when you say
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
Outside the moon bleeds
with white light and mystery
and the sky remains black.
on Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk
22 Aug 2006, 6:49 AM
I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.
on An All-American Fairy by Edna Sweetlove
22 Aug 2006, 6:51 AM
too prose-like.
on Message sent by A_Dark_Calm
30 Aug 2006, 9:41 AM
I think the thirteenth line should read.. 'seem' instead of seemed. Apart from that.... it's beautiful.
And welcome to Poemranker.
And welcome to Poemranker.
on Royal Blades by Dovina
4 Sep 2006, 12:59 PM
Hmmmmm , Nice scene..... and if only the poetry bunch could see her now? wow.
on From Across the Line by Dovina
5 Sep 2006, 6:12 AM
Wow D. Looks like you haven't come up with something really really good in a long time until now. Cheers.
on Once they were gliders. by half.italian
10 Sep 2006, 8:51 AM
What is this about? Maybe I am too tired... or this has no meaning. If the latter, kindly excuse me.
on Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac
13 Sep 2006, 3:09 AM
Hey, hey zodiac. Good to see you back. PR's been missing you.
on Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina
15 Sep 2006, 7:43 PM
This is much better than your previous post. Anybody I know?
on A Scientistâs Prayer by Dovina
10 Oct 2006, 12:41 AM
D... this piece could do with some editing. Sorry for no vote as I need to read this well. Don't know when I'll get the time for that. I've just scanned through and thought it needed fixing. Am having a whale of a time in the gulf. Terribly hot though... but it's fun. Will try to check in when I can.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2006, 6:35 PM
teenborg, how come you vote for yourself?
on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta
6 Nov 2006, 6:50 PM
Hi everyone. Sorry for the silence, but I'm back now. Hope to see you all more often.
on Three Worlds by Dovina
13 Nov 2006, 6:43 PM
D... It's surprising how you rhyme your lines. It's so unusual of you.
Apart from that, its sad to see that PR is heart broken.
Apart from that, its sad to see that PR is heart broken.