on The Birds by lunar
1 Jan 2003, 4:37 PM
The film is better.
on if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
2 Jan 2003, 5:49 PM
Hilarious!
on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
2 Jan 2003, 5:59 PM
Replace the last word with "The victim's shoes are consumed."
on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Jan 2003, 9:32 AM
Indeede my poeme is not a Vilanelle. I just made up the rhyme scheme and decided to call it a Vilanelle. In much the same way I used to call all my poemes Concrete because most people have no idea what the fuck Concrete is, and also because I found it amusing when people kept posting outraged comments saying "This aint concrete!"
Oh, and by the way -
This aint Vilanelle!
Oh, and by the way -
This aint Vilanelle!
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2003, 1:37 PM
I just want to know one thing: does horus8 really have a Superman haircut?
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2003, 1:54 PM
Mine's shorter and contains no college words.
GUTTED TO THE MAX.
GUTTED TO THE MAX.
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2003, 2:49 PM
I wish I knew what it was like to be obsessed with my gender.
on The poemranker desk by lunar
4 Jan 2003, 2:56 PM
"69" is the best bit.
on Shark by cleverdevice
7 Jan 2003, 10:41 AM
Knives. The word 'knifes' is the third person singular of the verb 'to knife'. For insance,
"The disgruntled weaver knifes your face with some knives."
"The disgruntled weaver knifes your face with some knives."
on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan
7 Jan 2003, 2:00 PM
"beautific Dream" - "beautific" is not a word. Though I suppose you could make it up and say it means "beautiful". However, "beatific" IS a word. Perhaps you meant to say "beatific"? If so, that's great!
"Scores of tunes entuned and I deem" - what do you 'deem'? Doesn't make any sense at all! Though I daresay it does rhyme with dream! Great work!
"O my brittle of a voice" - this line also doesn't make sense.
"Scores of tunes entuned and I deem" - what do you 'deem'? Doesn't make any sense at all! Though I daresay it does rhyme with dream! Great work!
"O my brittle of a voice" - this line also doesn't make sense.
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 6:12 PM
Your poemes are ace.
on Backwards baby blend by Blade
7 Jan 2003, 6:45 PM
For a minute I thought you were watching Brain Dead in reverse, but then I realised it doesn't have this scene.
on electronically by Quarton
7 Jan 2003, 6:48 PM
too many ellipses...tired theme
the final verse...doesn't rhyme
the final verse...doesn't rhyme
on alms by famenglory
7 Jan 2003, 6:50 PM
THIS SURE IS GREAT.
on Apocalypse by marvelis
7 Jan 2003, 6:50 PM
I was in the Drawing Room, belaboring Colonel Mustard with the Shoe-horne. Where were you?
on Untimely Demise by marvelis
7 Jan 2003, 6:58 PM
So it is the people of average strength who will remain standing? I suggest you read my poeme "Unwanted gift".
on insomnia by Bill Z Bub
7 Jan 2003, 7:34 PM
If you removed the first bit and the title, it would be an ace ending to a tale of creeping horror.
on Bliss Eternal by Freethinker1602
7 Jan 2003, 9:04 PM
this is soooo beautiful lol ^_^ hey mbe l8er we can get together?? ok asl