on Sod by jrtails
14 Oct 2002, 7:28 AM
It doesn't matter if people don't like your work, jrtails -- three of my poemes were the three worst-rated poemes for a while, but I persevered and look where I am now!! Only halfway down the worst list!!!
on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 7:31 AM
Oh good God, no!! Not an "GOWN OF SORROW"!!! I bought my gown from a very disreputable Merchante who had but a badmington racquet where his face should have been. Perhaps it is a GOWN OF SORROW.
on A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke
14 Oct 2002, 10:32 AM
Because it's a motherfucking bumblebee, that's why. What the hell is wrong with you?
on Two Towers by Tascobar
14 Oct 2002, 11:09 AM
This poeme is good, but I would change the title to "WTF?!?!"
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2002, 12:31 PM
This would probably be the best poeme ever if it was just the first two lines.
on The generosity of others. by darby pyn
19 Oct 2002, 12:44 PM
This isn't about generosity. Write another poeme saying how important it is to be generous.
on health cards by slipping
19 Oct 2002, 12:45 PM
too long, didn't read
on Death's Awaiting by The_Shadows_Smile
19 Oct 2002, 12:47 PM
"I hold it tight/Not wanting to let go". Oh, how beautifully that speaks of mine own experiences. If only I hadn't eaten those accursed prunes!
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 5:50 AM
A good try!
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 5:50 AM
A good try!
on Ted and Fred by worldsofwar
21 Oct 2002, 5:51 AM
Excellent use of 'Fred' to rhyme with 'Ted'!!!111
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 5:52 AM
A good try!
on My Friend? by Blade
21 Oct 2002, 4:30 PM
It's spelled "gonhorrhehaea".
on Die by little_angel_maria
21 Oct 2002, 4:31 PM
And then, my friend, you die.
And then, my friend, you DIE, man!
beautiful. poetry at its finest.
And then, my friend, you DIE, man!
beautiful. poetry at its finest.
on love by little_angel_maria
21 Oct 2002, 4:34 PM
What a pathetic fantasy. It's not even an poeme. Good effort!!
on On a chill morning by razorgrin
21 Oct 2002, 5:14 PM
The first four lines are extremely dandy.
on nothing could by nentwined
21 Oct 2002, 5:16 PM
What could have been so shocking that you lost all forward momentum? O God no -- don't say it! It wasn't... it surely couldn't have been...
on My Friend? by Blade
21 Oct 2002, 5:41 PM
I have a good friend named Sir Bum.
A scoundrel like you he'd benumb
With his rolling pins three
And the greatest of glee.
Wait, hold on a sec. I've just come.
A scoundrel like you he'd benumb
With his rolling pins three
And the greatest of glee.
Wait, hold on a sec. I've just come.