replying on Little Girl by Pervy Elf
24 Sep 2003, 11:23 PM
Me, yes. Him, no.
on Neophyte Bourgeoisie by EAger to Offend
24 Sep 2003, 11:21 PM
Yea, sometimes life is sweet, sometimes it's the extra's.(The deck, afternoon brunches, Lady McBeth?)
Sometimes it's time alone.
Sometimes it's time alone.
replying on Little Girl by Pervy Elf
24 Sep 2003, 11:04 PM
O.K. you need to answer my questions in order, so are you cute? (I'm a man, I have to ask, AGAIN)And why capitolize the H in him?
on Little Girl by Pervy Elf
24 Sep 2003, 10:55 PM
Capitol H Him. Do you mean God? I'm sure not, so why capitolize "him" ?The beginning of each line in a poem should be cap'd.
on An End to the Beginning by Pervy Elf
24 Sep 2003, 10:47 PM
You are still so young. Don't stress it. If it's not right, don't worry about it. Move on and don't look back.Life's too short to deal with assholes. Are you cute by the way? I'm a poet you know. Read some of mine. Tell me what you think. just click my name.
on Little Girl by Pervy Elf
24 Sep 2003, 10:34 PM
I don't know what to think for sure. Why all the Cap's?
I see where youre going but I don't follow.
I see where youre going but I don't follow.
on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades
18 Sep 2003, 9:05 PM
A note on life perhaps? Not yours I hope.
on Queen Of The Ring by baphomet
13 Sep 2003, 7:39 PM
O.K. something is wrong here. I can smell it (distant smell of ether.) But still waiting for the continuation, only because I want to know what happened to the queer guy, you know sillygoose. I hope the spread his entrails across three continents, That would make this an interesting read.
on Angelic Fornication by The_Third_Isis
13 Sep 2003, 7:30 PM
Well, what can I say. Hmm...She sounds really tasty, what with the socks, the skirt, etc. That alone deserves a 10.
replying on A Question of the Future by razorgrin
8 Sep 2003, 7:56 PM
Well, you see, she did leave a comment. Then she proceeded to give a zero without a comment. When it falls within a minute, it's fairly obvious. I know I rambled at the end, but 0's without comments really pissssssss me off. There are 1's and 2's etc. If you think a poem sucks bad enough to deserve a 0, then it must be the shittiest poem ever built. This one happened to have several 10's. So, are we to assume that razorgrin--No, let's not make assumptions. Would you care to read my last three posted? Thank you.
replying on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge
8 Sep 2003, 7:45 PM
Come on Electro, your first attempt made the top 20. Considering all the pagans on this site SHEEEEIT.
on Something Lost, Something Gained by Irischer Junge
8 Sep 2003, 7:42 PM
I have to agree with nentwined, before you post a poem, read it aloud to yourself. You will find that the flow doesn't exist. Just read it to yourself and try again.
on A Question of the Future by razorgrin
8 Sep 2003, 7:37 PM
I didn't mean to bash your best bud, but I couldn,t think of anything else to rhyme with vote.
on A Question of the Future by razorgrin
8 Sep 2003, 7:32 PM
Here,s a 0 for the bitch in a tree
For all the 0's she's given me
I don't care for her her shit I have to say
But when giving her 0's I don't go out of my way
But now I'm playing the game she plays.
She looks at the best of the poems here
Then hands me 0's like she has no fear.
It's not the content
or the rhythm that gets her bent
Or maybe it is
How the FUCK would we know
if she doesn't leave a comment.
But that's just like our friend
To leave the worst possible vote
Like the poem could be written
by her sex partner the goat.
For all the 0's she's given me
I don't care for her her shit I have to say
But when giving her 0's I don't go out of my way
But now I'm playing the game she plays.
She looks at the best of the poems here
Then hands me 0's like she has no fear.
It's not the content
or the rhythm that gets her bent
Or maybe it is
How the FUCK would we know
if she doesn't leave a comment.
But that's just like our friend
To leave the worst possible vote
Like the poem could be written
by her sex partner the goat.