on Summer by MaliqaTara
8 Sep 2003, 7:04 PM
What happened? You seemed so happy.
on Plum diggity by tadpole
8 Sep 2003, 10:52 AM
My tastebuds swoon in anticipation, where to find these tasty morsels?
replying on 'Till Then by sliver
8 Sep 2003, 10:39 AM
Thank you Tadpole, Your response proves that I hit my mark. Much appreciated.
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
5 Sep 2003, 8:27 PM
I like it, I see now why it rates so high. kudos
on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
3 Sep 2003, 4:25 PM
You are most assuredly a sick fuck,Rot in hell with your jizz crusted crap.
on The One and Only by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 4:21 PM
Sounds like Eminem on an off day.
on Curiously here by philthegreek
3 Sep 2003, 4:19 PM
Personally I enjoyed the part about the fresh young girl,other than that, well...
on Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend
3 Sep 2003, 7:38 AM
A vivid picture of a place I'm sure I've been, I just can't remember when.
on #2 Entry from Chico, a stalker on Pico, Jason Bigg's lobster by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Sep 2003, 7:26 AM
Chico has issues big ones
on R.O.X. by InvertedEar
3 Sep 2003, 7:23 AM
I don't know about erotic, but it's a great song. She always makes good music eh?
on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
3 Sep 2003, 7:19 AM
Not too shabby, I especially like the third stanza, the scooter...
replying on Carry You Inside by sliver
2 Sep 2003, 8:39 AM
Let's see one of yours tadpole.
replying on Carry You Inside by sliver
2 Sep 2003, 8:37 AM
Thanks again
replying on Between Now And Then by sliver
2 Sep 2003, 8:35 AM
Exactly what I felt when I wrote it. Thank you.
on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8
21 Aug 2003, 8:46 PM
Try putting your points in your slits and slots and quit writing about your sister. This sucked
on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8
18 Aug 2003, 7:44 PM
You know what the difference is between this submission and a bucket of shit? The bucket buddy. But keep trying, I enjoy a good laugh
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
15 Aug 2003, 9:08 PM
You forgot to add me to your list. I've rhymed Heart/apart etc. but we all grow
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
15 Aug 2003, 6:09 PM
Why the 's in the third stanza? You had a good flow 'till then.
on (The vinyards of Tuscany) by Patsy
15 Aug 2003, 6:03 PM
Sounds almost like Rome after Nero