on Compassion by Kashi
14 Jul 2002, 3:01 PM
Don't believe in angels or God but the poem was pretty well written.
on sitting at the cliff's edge by nentwined
15 Sep 2003, 3:53 PM
Very beautiful evocative line: clinging us each tighter to the other
Liked this poem Very much
Liked this poem Very much
on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Sep 2003, 3:57 PM
Thought provoking, but not great poetry.
on The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>
5 Jan 2003, 1:55 PM
Yes I am biased, yes I am thrilled!
Great poem!! I echo all the sentiments! Jill!
Great poem!! I echo all the sentiments! Jill!
on Live My Death by Rich Clark
14 Jul 2002, 2:54 PM
I am guessing you are talking of glaucoma or blindness, not metaphorically.
Made me think. Jill S.
Made me think. Jill S.
on MY BURNING RAGE by MEMORIES
14 Jul 2002, 2:56 PM
Intense. Some cliches, but it
felt heartfelt.
felt heartfelt.
on The beggar in me by dilips_10
14 Jul 2002, 2:58 PM
I liked it.
on Love at 4 A.M. by x311
14 Jul 2002, 2:59 PM
Too cliched, not very well written.
on Forever Untitled. by LucidRevelation
14 Jul 2002, 3:03 PM
Not bad! Jill S.
on Smile by feelinglistless
14 Jul 2002, 3:04 PM
A bit cliched, but still nice!
Jill S.
Jill S.
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2002, 3:05 PM
Good pun! (Winturd). Jill S.
on Sperm Donor Clown by ObiWonKn
14 Jul 2002, 3:07 PM
Interesting. Very bitter.
on The Deep Dark Light by seebergerb
14 Jul 2002, 3:11 PM
one spelling error (You wilderness you yearned for?). Also- mixed
metaphors, don't work together- taste what you wanted and a locket around your neck? Needs work.
metaphors, don't work together- taste what you wanted and a locket around your neck? Needs work.
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2002, 3:13 PM
I don't get the title at all.
I liked - but please...Keep on going.
I liked - but please...Keep on going.
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2002, 3:14 PM
Trying too hard, doesn't make it for me.
on Dammit by Cha no Onna
14 Jul 2002, 3:16 PM
The line_ Always make backups- bringing in the computer element did not work for me.
Perhaps a better line- always make copies. Still, good poem! Jill S.
Perhaps a better line- always make copies. Still, good poem! Jill S.
on The Beggar by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Jul 2002, 3:18 PM
Not very good.
use of the apostrophes.
Still, I liked it.