on Ode To Mushroomhead by Beseech
16 May 2003, 7:58 AM
Ye-es
on Not quite myselfs. by cleverdevice
18 May 2003, 11:38 AM
Yep.
on Jokie Smurf by Bachus
16 May 2003, 7:52 AM
Marvellous as always Mr. B.
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 9:03 AM
Poor, mr. B, very poor...
Like "Stuck To The Hob", but less classy. Much less classy.
Like "Stuck To The Hob", but less classy. Much less classy.
on Recipe for Regaining Youth by Blade
18 May 2003, 11:54 AM
This has currently only got one comment-mine-and I really can't see that changing. However I would urge everybody who read it to vote it a zero; who knows we might just get this one an average of 0.00
Let me lead the way.
Let me lead the way.
on Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig
18 May 2003, 11:42 AM
It does seem a bit too loose in places, and 'I was very angry with God' doesn't really do credit to your ability. Even so it's an enjoyable read, and nice to see people trying something a bit more traditional/ classical (and succeeding!) 9
on some deleted poem
18 May 2003, 11:45 AM
Was it you who told me that if you do the search for kaolin fire on here all it comes up with is something by poemwanker? If so I can see another addition to that list. Very thoughtful piece, monsieur. 9
on John Denver's hang-glider by horus8
16 May 2003, 8:02 AM
Glorious.
AT LAST THE COLLEGE HAS UNBLOCKED THE RANKER!!!
I am now in a generous mood, have a ten on the house.
AT LAST THE COLLEGE HAS UNBLOCKED THE RANKER!!!
I am now in a generous mood, have a ten on the house.
on some deleted poem
16 May 2003, 7:56 AM
Most certainly, but for how long do we think the ranker will remain unblocked? Here this made me laugh, and passing references to the fjords earns this an 8
on AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 May 2003, 1:54 PM
Yikes! Funny, very funny most certainly.
I'd like to see "even gets" changed around, it sounds better. 8
I'd like to see "even gets" changed around, it sounds better. 8
on some deleted poem
18 May 2003, 11:43 AM
*YAAAWWWN*-oh, no, not at all
on My Nieghborhood(2) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
18 May 2003, 11:49 AM
Yeah I suppose it does need editing, but I actually really like the way this one's going! 7
on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT
17 Apr 2005, 12:53 PM
Lovely, I particularly liked the fountain and the exchange of stone to grass.
The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
on The Layer of Black by emilyowey
17 Apr 2005, 12:55 PM
As a student I feel obliged to be wracked with guilt at not being black, impoverished or in prison (or any combination thereof)
on Virgin Poet by emilyowey
17 Apr 2005, 12:59 PM
Preach my pain also, oh how I long for those youthful days too. I appreciate this. 9
on the Dreamer by darylchew
17 Apr 2005, 1:08 PM
I guarantee people on this highly-accommodating site will slate this. Make it humorous and you might convert them. Perhaps after the 'will he ever act' you could put something like 'will he remember to breathe?' or maybe 'will he contract AIDS?' (although the answer to that seems quite obvious to me).
It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
on The Incubation by oneglove
17 Apr 2005, 1:10 PM
Glorious
on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
19 Apr 2005, 1:14 PM
Oddly enough the big votes here do seem to go with the big words rather than the big attitudes. I liked being shouted at although a couple of the rhymes weren't my cup of tea (although I'm in no position to criticise other peoples' rhymes), 8 from me.