on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 12:57 PM
Kind of agree with mr p&k. Even so it looks promising as a song-nice one!
on beat myself with a stick by sir_heff
17 Jan 2003, 10:55 AM
Do you now?
on Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz
22 Jan 2003, 1:15 PM
Good work, scitz, good work!
on The last day of an old year by poetandknowit
23 Jan 2003, 11:18 AM
An enjoyable read (although it was quite difficult to concentrate-must not listen to Crash Test Dummies while reading poetry!).
Yes, anyway-this is good, Mr. poetandknowit. I especially like the last bit of the second stanza very much. It's something slightly different to normal.
Perhaps now that I've acknowledged you're a good writer you'll feel more inclined to give me some help? :)
It would be greatly appreciated.
Regardless, I think I'll give this a nine.
Yes, anyway-this is good, Mr. poetandknowit. I especially like the last bit of the second stanza very much. It's something slightly different to normal.
Perhaps now that I've acknowledged you're a good writer you'll feel more inclined to give me some help? :)
It would be greatly appreciated.
Regardless, I think I'll give this a nine.
on The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz
22 Jan 2003, 1:17 PM
Oh dear, scitz, you crack me up yet again...9!
And yes, ewoks do kick ass (if they can reach, that is!)
And yes, ewoks do kick ass (if they can reach, that is!)
on Surreal by wordontheverge
21 Jan 2003, 1:29 AM
Like the end! Nice work, perhaps you could do another version of this and bring out the surreality (just for lil old me!) because I'd love to see more images-check out my 'Am I Still Here' if you want.
Yes anyway, a good poem here's a nine.
Yes anyway, a good poem here's a nine.
on Alms for the Digger by Wulf
21 Jan 2003, 1:33 AM
First verse doesn't seem to fit with the feel of the rest of this one. Take it out and turn it into a new poem 'cause it's great (well I really like it!).
I'm not sure what to vote this, I'll have another read and think about it.
I'm not sure what to vote this, I'll have another read and think about it.
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 1:34 AM
Poem=good!
on Tree (WARNING: do NOT hug!) by Yardbird
21 Jan 2003, 5:07 AM
Marvellous...just marvellous.
on some deleted poem
20 Jan 2003, 8:29 AM
Oh yes.
It was worth every single penny of it!
It was worth every single penny of it!
on Who Flamed Roger Rabbit? by poemwanker
17 Jan 2003, 11:48 AM
Poo.
on Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim
17 Jan 2003, 12:01 PM
Anyone in particular?
on dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY
17 Jan 2003, 5:01 AM
No.
No.
No.
on Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8
21 Jan 2003, 1:37 AM
Bonza!
on dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY
17 Jan 2003, 5:01 AM
Possibly I should say it again?
No.
No.
on Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus
20 Jan 2003, 4:10 AM
That's just nitpicking. I love this.
on some deleted poem
20 Jan 2003, 4:11 AM
PCs have better games. HALF-LIFE IS STILL THE BEST GAME EVER!!!