replying on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger
19 Feb 2007, 1:21 AM
Where are you hiding, doc? Send me an email or something.
on A Night out With Chaucer by cleverdevice
19 Feb 2007, 1:19 AM
I have finally worked out where you stole this little beauty from. Leave the Bailey classics alone, you thieving cad! -bow'ls-
on Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 Feb 2007, 1:16 AM
The plural of "terrible poeme" is "www.allpoetry.com"
replying on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger
16 Feb 2007, 3:14 PM
"both over and under told..." -- how so?
I don't know that it's particularly clever, I just wanted to muck around with a rondel for fun.
I don't know that it's particularly clever, I just wanted to muck around with a rondel for fun.
replying on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger
16 Feb 2007, 3:14 PM
Thank you, Paul :-)
on Yet more woe by Stephen Robins
16 Feb 2007, 3:12 PM
Have you seen Otis Lee Crenshaw (Rich Hall) do his prison rape song?
on The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani
16 Feb 2007, 3:09 PM
Possibly the best part of this poeme is the rhyming of 'anus' with 'gayness', although it seems to be more suited to a limerick:
I've heard of a brown homo anus
That travels the land spreading gayness
O'er mountains and glades
It runs, spreading AIDS
Look out! It's come to bestain us!
I've heard of a brown homo anus
That travels the land spreading gayness
O'er mountains and glades
It runs, spreading AIDS
Look out! It's come to bestain us!
replying on Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove
13 Feb 2007, 5:48 AM
'Bumface' is even more awesome.
on The Ballad of Rakesh Rajani, Court Reporter by Rakesh Rajani
13 Feb 2007, 5:44 AM
THE SAGA CONTINUES...
replying on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger
13 Feb 2007, 1:59 AM
Sorry, this is a rondel so the rhymes gotta stay.
replying on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger
13 Feb 2007, 1:58 AM
Perhaps I shouldn't have been so anal over keeping the capitals - it doesn't work without the 'not', I don't think. She's meant to believe that she is perfectly fine, and can't work out why people walk past without acknowledging her. I'll have a think about the semicolons - you might be right there. Thank you :-)
on self-suffocation by Phalkon
12 Feb 2007, 3:06 PM
And you never actually answered SupremeDreamer's (valid) question: what are you talking about when you say 'i tendons tear apart'?
on The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani
12 Feb 2007, 11:54 AM
"He proved as popular at school as a quick glass of AIDS" is the greatest -=Dark_Angel=- tribute line I think I've ever seen. -10-! And for the Warhammer reference you get double AIDS. -10- -20-
on Celui by half.italian
12 Feb 2007, 11:46 AM
I don't think you need anything beyond the third line.