replying on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
3 Feb 2003, 9:02 AM
You better be. She was a fluffy adorable thing.
on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
2 Feb 2003, 4:43 PM
nice addition.
on Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus
2 Feb 2003, 4:36 PM
What about the Silver surfer?
on American Idol epiphany in haiku by Shardik
2 Feb 2003, 4:33 PM
that's it in a nutshell. an appropriate receptacle. 10. rock on.
on NASA Fireworks by TheDevil
2 Feb 2003, 4:30 PM
Explosions rock. Icarian joy and gladness.
replying on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
2 Feb 2003, 4:29 PM
aww..whadda you know? the vodka was warm anyway, hence the need for ice.
replying on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
2 Feb 2003, 4:24 PM
Limonade's adorable hamster died and we can't bury her until the ground thaws. So she will continue to sit in a plastic bag labeled "Hamster" until we can put her to rest. Now ya know.
on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik
31 Jan 2003, 12:03 PM
Damn fine. quality use of imagery. "Dracula sold out to the japanese" and "Atlas shrugs, I guess he's got the clap again" are mighty good. splendiferous
on For Brianna by MaliqaTara
31 Jan 2003, 12:00 PM
The sincerity of the emotion comes through really well. As a poem, it has some technical flaws, but not to any huge degree. I'm not even going to say anything blasphemous because of the religious content. Needs a little polishing, but has some shine already.
on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
31 Jan 2003, 11:55 AM
Very nice. I go for walks through shoulder-high snowbanks. It's dark and echoey.
on Equality by Freethinker1602
31 Jan 2003, 9:42 AM
Aww..and you even think we care about your sad sad pain of runny eyeliner...here's a zero-flavoured lollipop.
on The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602
31 Jan 2003, 9:39 AM
The redeeming part was the "know my pian" bit. Funniest twist ever. All this time I was reading what looked like a Serious and Heartfelt Poeme, but pian was a great satirical twist. Of course if it really is just a typo, that makes you an illiterate fucktard.
on Amelioration is only relative by Freethinker1602
31 Jan 2003, 9:37 AM
Enter, readers at your own riske, for here there be angst. And shab-ass angst at that.
on Thursday by w~* ATHENA *~w
31 Jan 2003, 9:34 AM
I like seeing the very deformed. They amuse me.
replying on Love spank by Shardik
31 Jan 2003, 9:32 AM
"You don't scare me. That could be anyone's ass" -Mayor quimby, the simpsons
on Love spank by Shardik
30 Jan 2003, 12:56 PM
Absolutely Splendid! You're awfully pushy for a bottom, though. you know what impertinence means....To the rack! you can take this 10 with you, though.
on The Sunset Blvd. Cabbage limericks by Shardik
30 Jan 2003, 12:54 PM
Mmm..soy lattes.
replying on Perversions by razorgrin
30 Jan 2003, 10:55 AM
As long as there are still odd fetishes, I will write about them. #4 is about a third done.
replying on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
30 Jan 2003, 10:51 AM
I just wanted to write about Ed Gein. I can't tell what will be next, that would spoil the surprise. Keep out of my kitchen until the next batch of kink-cookies are baked.
replying on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
30 Jan 2003, 10:48 AM
I am indeed creepy. Creepier when you see me. Your writing is reminiscent of Chuckie M., yes. You focus too much on the helter-skelter. I was more inspired by Issei Sagawa, Leopold von Sacher-Masoch, de Sade (you should read more), the music of Nick Cave and of Tom Waits and a personal fascination for the goddess Kali and the Aghori sect of Hinduism. And Surrealism and Dada.