on ending by Limness
25 Nov 2002, 10:26 AM
nice.
on Damn chickens by ciantu
25 Nov 2002, 10:24 AM
I like chicken.
on Smoking Clitoris with PHD handles by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Nov 2002, 10:23 AM
lovely.
on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird
22 Nov 2002, 10:49 AM
O excellent!
on Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird
22 Nov 2002, 7:36 AM
who liked to drive on the autobahn.
he killed lots of deer,
as they stood there in fear!
and often he'd swerve for the lesser fawn.
....hope I helped :)
he killed lots of deer,
as they stood there in fear!
and often he'd swerve for the lesser fawn.
....hope I helped :)
on Worldly Wise by anitawit
22 Nov 2002, 7:12 AM
the ONLY word I don't thnik fits is "scruples". It seems out of character. Otherwise, I liked it a lot--a 10.
on Chew your food! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Sep 2002, 7:49 AM
it almost meant something---
on Pork by AEcutee1435
17 Sep 2002, 7:46 AM
perhaps too simple....
on Moon and Azalea by Aidaho
17 Sep 2002, 7:43 AM
excellent. most excellent.
on A-Team, vol I by Agemo-Z
17 Sep 2002, 7:34 AM
I pity the fool that gives this a bad rating!
on Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus
17 Sep 2002, 7:32 AM
when you were a kid, did you play pinata with hornet's nests? it seems that your goal is only to illicit a negative response. if that was your intention--you have found success.
on Spring Haiku by Staika
17 Sep 2002, 7:30 AM
effective simile. good show.
on S by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Sep 2002, 7:29 AM
perplexingly violent.
on Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay
17 Sep 2002, 7:26 AM
I failed math.
on Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Sep 2002, 7:22 AM
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on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi
17 Sep 2002, 7:21 AM
your cliche title weakens your poem