on A Short Letter by Ranger
15 Jan 2003, 9:45 AM
nit witty, but succinct. bravo.
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Jan 2003, 9:43 AM
tremendously brave and reverent (sorry)...downright boy scouty, i must say!
on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Jan 2003, 9:42 AM
last line should rhyme with the first two.
on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man
15 Jan 2003, 9:41 AM
knob?
Also, I'm seeing a pattern here of people making fun of one another. I hope its all in good fun.
Also, I'm seeing a pattern here of people making fun of one another. I hope its all in good fun.
on perversions 2: the revenge by razorgrin
15 Jan 2003, 9:40 AM
very nicely done. bravo and two shakes.
on Jockey by betty swallox
15 Jan 2003, 9:38 AM
a bit wordy--it muddles up the pace.
on Cat by Topaz Servias
15 Jan 2003, 9:38 AM
Limericks use the distinctive rhyming scheme of a-a-b-b-a, where the first two lines set the scene, the third and fourth lines quickly twist things about, and the fifth line hammers the conclusion. (first, second, and fifth lines are trimeter, third and fourth are dimeter).
this is from the help screen, not my original writing.
Limericks focus on the absurd or the silly when they're not downright naughty.
this is from the help screen, not my original writing.
Limericks focus on the absurd or the silly when they're not downright naughty.
on Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}>
15 Jan 2003, 9:36 AM
I suppose its all in good fun. I was a smidge distracted by the lack of line break separating the rhymes in the 3rd line of each limerick.
on Track.... by Topaz Servias
15 Jan 2003, 9:33 AM
nice, but not limericky.
on Frustration by DewDrop
7 Jan 2003, 8:56 AM
I like this a lot, but I think you may have misclassified it as a limerick.
on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
18 Dec 2002, 6:46 AM
a nice poem to read to your family. maybe you could make a christmas special, charlie brown...
on FHjk by Dark Angle
10 Dec 2002, 11:39 AM
have you tried Viagra?
on The Spankbox by Garrett S Sexton
5 Dec 2002, 7:30 AM
the last line is inconsistant and base. it interrupts the flow and tone.
on Society by Garrett S Sexton
5 Dec 2002, 6:18 AM
Let's not confuse vulgarity with art.
on Basic comedy by Garrett S Sexton
5 Dec 2002, 6:15 AM
craftless.
on A meeting at Maverick, then dinner. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Nov 2002, 10:31 AM
haiku?
but the rhythm is amiss.
a fine poem, but not really limericky.