on some deleted poem
25 Jan 2003, 12:52 AM
If there was a twenty on this mockibly primitive keyboard, i would don you with it..You are indeed. A master.
on Breeze by Nicholas Jones
25 Jan 2003, 12:52 AM
tremendous.
on My bedtime story by famenglory
26 Jan 2003, 8:47 PM
very creative? If creativity could be bottled..your bottle would be a paper office cup.
on The Magical Hairy Chair by Nagi
26 Jan 2003, 8:52 PM
"It didn't look like the look of it," problem here.
otherwise quite creative..hear that flamenboring? creative..quite. see the difference? good.
otherwise quite creative..hear that flamenboring? creative..quite. see the difference? good.
than like a weird flaming alien finds me having gay midget sex in vegas with a theoretical math problem turned flesh, and the waitress says, "care for an olive you greek freak," and i'm like beatch WHATEVER! BA NAH NAH DA NA DA NA NA
BA NAH NAH DA NA DA NA NA CUZ I LIVE IN THE DIVEDED STATE OF NOSTALGIA THE DIVEDED STATE ODERFUSCIA WHATEVER...all i can say is in five hours i will be snowboarding down a gorgeous alpine mountain carving it up...WHATEVER HA! urp... ?
BA NAH NAH DA NA DA NA NA CUZ I LIVE IN THE DIVEDED STATE OF NOSTALGIA THE DIVEDED STATE ODERFUSCIA WHATEVER...all i can say is in five hours i will be snowboarding down a gorgeous alpine mountain carving it up...WHATEVER HA! urp... ?
on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
30 Jan 2003, 1:14 AM
Brave.
on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
30 Jan 2003, 1:18 AM
What am i chopped liver? i've read this before though, correct..this edit's clean. nice onee
on the secret life of eyebrows by Bill Z Bub
30 Jan 2003, 1:20 AM
how could i not ten this?
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
30 Jan 2003, 1:24 AM
Zest is a soap that leaves very little film, like this poem.
on Small Town Tavern by NinjaPoet
30 Jan 2003, 2:08 AM
This is something other than other it's otherthan. What most impresess me about this is the authors need to be something other than someone who writes others, but well. well? well enough to fippantly describe something that's going on in droves currently it's called the i'm a piss poor drunk with a big peeper and an inclination to things other than normal otherthans. bukowsky wrote better than this while not even writing, but talking someone else to do it for him while he lied gurgling drunk in a crevass...called 2.00$ pussy with a side of raman and kcrw.
In fact it should be illegal to mention acdc, metallica, and bukowsky..in a poem that is clearl about the advantages and disadvanteges of eyeball fucking.a
In fact it should be illegal to mention acdc, metallica, and bukowsky..in a poem that is clearl about the advantages and disadvanteges of eyeball fucking.a
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2003, 2:17 AM
you don't mind if i do a vilanelle using "you don't know how hard it is" saying that outloud...makes me feel profound like captain ahab chewing on moby's dick. Also, on a better note..your poem is the first poem i've ever seen void of poetry, also very profound..you my friend have a gift at destroying something that's as easy as breathing. NOT! READ My LIPS POETRY IS NOT EASY IT IS TAXING, OBSESSIVE, TEDIOUS, INSANE, CONSUMING, VOLATAILE. RELIGIOUS. now what your doing up there is blowing smoke up my ass while dressed as smoky the bear which i should dare say is a universal crime of the first order. i sentence you to life void of poetry. WAIT SHIT! i'm too late.
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2003, 2:20 AM
If i die while choking.
it means me and you are comet streaking homos.
it means me and you are comet streaking homos.
on some deleted poem
3 Feb 2003, 1:51 PM
Will you write my eulogy, please?
on some deleted poem
3 Feb 2003, 1:54 PM
If you put your brain in a hot frying pan, would the pan crack or your sole?
on Over beast by Crakyamuni
3 Feb 2003, 1:56 PM
It might take your whole life to learn how to spell silicone, idiot.
on some deleted poem
3 Feb 2003, 2:04 PM
I would call it Culdesac. Then lose all of the pretentious bullshit you worded it with, because it's just fucking incredibly shortsighted... seriously this poem looks like a blind kindergarten class pitching horse shoes in traffic.
the haiku would be
Spoiled architect brat.
Boo hoo you forked up again
Scratch head, skyscraper.
the haiku would be
Spoiled architect brat.
Boo hoo you forked up again
Scratch head, skyscraper.
on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Feb 2003, 2:44 PM
Chuckey cheese, where a kid can be a kid.
on NASA Fireworks by TheDevil
4 Feb 2003, 2:45 PM
Is a radioactive smurf forced underwater a snork?
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
4 Feb 2003, 2:48 PM
I'll will have you refer to my pinata as the lonedisco29andahalf. Thankthee... to correct thyself lest we be forced to empty scabbarde and DANCE THE GAYE BLADE! urp.
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
4 Feb 2003, 2:51 PM
Why sir, do you make me need a shower. bye. now i must vaccuum. everything. again. AGAIN! you know what i've fond? the process of compulsive cleaning helps my sole cope with time and kale and being a secret agent. It's wholesome good clean fun. whoops gotta to go... the dryer just chirped.