on Creativity. by Blue Magpie
22 Jan 2003, 7:38 PM
The sole is a mysterious thing, but i feel that you have described it's 'meaningful' secrets properly.lol.?
on It's something about you by devina
22 Jan 2003, 7:42 PM
you always love the people that hate you the most. by the way..did you see where my frisbee landed?J
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 7:44 PM
the title alone was worth a ten stone., but than you wrote a poem too.
on Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul
22 Jan 2003, 7:47 PM
Have no fear..it's only a black out while eating at mcdonalds, feel that...there there...hold my mcnuggets.
on Maya by Reuben Spiteri
22 Jan 2003, 7:49 PM
this is by far the worst poem i've read of yours, sorry...6f
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 7:53 PM
lol? oh lol!, "lol". i hear south bitch is fabulous.
on Beyond Imagination by vulcan
22 Jan 2003, 7:56 PM
i am going to feature your poetry tonight on my show me thinks.
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 8:38 PM
So, i checked this out by the way..thanks.
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 8:41 PM
gold.
on The Crutchling by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
22 Jan 2003, 8:44 PM
silver.
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 8:51 PM
bronze, thus concludes another fifteen minutes withy the dark one...so listen...i was just playing my guitar along to the crutchling, and it worked, so do you think i could perhaps use those lyrics, and we go 50/50 with the rights to the song, and i just record it acoustic with guitar sort of t-rex cuz i got this whole english music thing going on in my head right now and it sounded good...i could let you her the recording before airing it?
on nothing less by corinacorrie
23 Jan 2003, 2:03 AM
But....Are you good looking?
on The Other Side of Me by Quarton
24 Jan 2003, 1:37 AM
J.D. Salinger.
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 11:42 AM
Lose the He, and just start it out with
Smelling (that makes it universaly challenging) lose the 'an' completely, lose
the to cover the fact...because we know that so it'll look like this.
Smelling sweetly
of some sad whore,
with expensive
perfume that a
guy like you
bought her.
Because the title says the rest
the chain of events is almost irrelevant when one is compressing
Smelling (that makes it universaly challenging) lose the 'an' completely, lose
the to cover the fact...because we know that so it'll look like this.
Smelling sweetly
of some sad whore,
with expensive
perfume that a
guy like you
bought her.
Because the title says the rest
the chain of events is almost irrelevant when one is compressing
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 2:23 PM
Call your bluff while i clean off my spurs with your face...o
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 2:34 PM
The title is spelled poorly sunshine.
I'll vote later after an edit..the rest was good.
I'll vote later after an edit..the rest was good.
on mornings, january by <~>
24 Jan 2003, 2:37 PM
chew it until thawed at work.
on The Ode that never was by Shardik
24 Jan 2003, 11:01 PM
I demand that you tell me immediately who told you about the pirgayte LeChoadke? DAMN IT MAN...SPEAK! you obviously are trained at the art of poetry! and should be forced to dance 'the prawne shuffle'. _e_t_e bastard! i know that's you come out..ye..plagiarist..you stole my lyr....... cockeyed vandal.