Re: Litany by zodiac	22-May-04/12:01 AM
touching... really...
Re: can't take the heat? by peaceseeker	21-May-04/11:58 PM
Welcome to Hell's Kitchen
Re: Jade Milieu by Enkidu	21-May-04/11:55 PM
Matter Piece. Absolute Matter!!! -9-
Re: Old Friends by sliver	21-May-04/11:53 PM
beautifully expression.
Re: Battered and Bruised by erickvisions	21-May-04/11:51 PM
Saddism, bad. Pimple/Lyrics(Hint: what this really is) need work. Way too much focus on ryhme. emotion, worked it up but not in any interestingly new style. -4-
Re: The Unseen by cuddlytiger17	21-May-04/11:43 PM
Allow your eye to do the only bleeding you cause yourself. Tears work so much better... Trust me I know... I almost married a "cutter" -8-
Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	21-May-04/11:35 PM
hmmm... seems a little lacking of... Something... Like substance, not so much depth more... purpose or drive, but I'm looking for a better word... Damn it. Someone able to help me figure what this lacks? No vote for now.
Re: Ten by horus8	21-May-04/11:24 PM
You never cease to amaze.
Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17	21-May-04/11:02 PM
There is so much more that could have been displayed here. It seems you focus your words like a bullet, but you limit the meaning by using a weak hand gun. he gained an enemy, Lost a love, and destroyed himself All in the same day Oh yeah, I do understand. Those lines are beautiful. I have. March 7th 2004. -9-
Re: a comment on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Apr-04/10:00 PM
A very wise Idea indeed.
Re: a comment on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Apr-04/10:00 PM
First commet. Think it explained it all. Co-write. My Flavoring laced with there style and expression.
Re: a comment on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Apr-04/9:57 AM
James's Writing Style Obviously, but they do make sense, they are about overwhelming sensations.
Re: a comment on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Apr-04/9:55 AM
Price of Tea in China?
Re: a comment on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Apr-04/9:54 AM
True, but tools are useful and this is only half written by me
Re: Bottom half of a phone by That One	25-Apr-04/10:21 PM
A bit bland. Liven it up.
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac	25-Apr-04/10:10 PM
Pimple? Borderline, a Masterpiece
Re: Perversions 8: The Reckoning by razorgrin	25-Apr-04/9:59 PM
Oh How I've waited!
Re: Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8	25-Apr-04/9:51 PM
Scary
Re: The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	25-Apr-04/9:19 PM
This is one of my first co-writes.
Re: A Pen Named Ed by Enkidu	10-Apr-04/2:05 AM
Masterful, Good Meter, and it made me Giggle