on Litany by zodiac
22 May 2004, 12:01 AM
touching... really...
on can't take the heat? by peaceseeker
21 May 2004, 11:58 PM
Welcome to Hell's Kitchen
on Jade Milieu by Enkidu
21 May 2004, 11:55 PM
Matter Piece. Absolute Matter!!! -9-
on Old Friends by sliver
21 May 2004, 11:53 PM
beautifully expression.
on Battered and Bruised by erickvisions
21 May 2004, 11:51 PM
Saddism, bad. Pimple/Lyrics(Hint: what this really is) need work. Way too much focus on ryhme. emotion, worked it up but not in any interestingly new style. -4-
on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17
21 May 2004, 11:43 PM
Allow your eye to do the only bleeding you cause yourself. Tears work so much better...
Trust me I know...
I almost married a "cutter"
-8-
Trust me I know...
I almost married a "cutter"
-8-
on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17
21 May 2004, 11:35 PM
hmmm...
seems a little lacking of... Something... Like substance, not so much depth more... purpose or drive, but I'm looking for a better word...
Damn it.
Someone able to help me figure what this lacks?
No vote for now.
seems a little lacking of... Something... Like substance, not so much depth more... purpose or drive, but I'm looking for a better word...
Damn it.
Someone able to help me figure what this lacks?
No vote for now.
on Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17
21 May 2004, 11:02 PM
There is so much more that could have been displayed here. It seems you focus your words like a bullet, but you limit the meaning by using a weak hand gun.
he gained an enemy,
Lost a love, and destroyed himself
All in the same day
Oh yeah, I do understand. Those lines are beautiful. I have. March 7th 2004. -9-
he gained an enemy,
Lost a love, and destroyed himself
All in the same day
Oh yeah, I do understand. Those lines are beautiful. I have. March 7th 2004. -9-
replying on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Apr 2004, 10:00 PM
A very wise Idea indeed.
replying on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Apr 2004, 10:00 PM
First commet. Think it explained it all. Co-write. My Flavoring laced with there style and expression.
replying on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Apr 2004, 9:57 AM
James's Writing Style Obviously, but they do make sense, they are about overwhelming sensations.
replying on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Apr 2004, 9:55 AM
Price of Tea in China?
replying on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Apr 2004, 9:54 AM
True, but tools are useful and this is only half written by me
on Bottom half of a phone by That One
25 Apr 2004, 10:21 PM
A bit bland. Liven it up.
on Something's gone wrong by zodiac
25 Apr 2004, 10:10 PM
Pimple? Borderline, a Masterpiece
on Perversions 8: The Reckoning by razorgrin
25 Apr 2004, 9:59 PM
Oh How I've waited!
on Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8
25 Apr 2004, 9:51 PM
Scary
on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom
25 Apr 2004, 9:19 PM
This is one of my first co-writes.
on A Pen Named Ed by Enkidu
10 Apr 2004, 2:05 AM
Masterful, Good Meter, and it made me Giggle