on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 9:01 AM
is this about MTV?
on some deleted poem
19 Jan 2003, 12:14 PM
hysterical, o virtual egg!
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 1:24 PM
angry. good and angry. and good.
on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Jan 2003, 7:39 AM
who knew baby seals could be such tongue-tripping mind-fucking fun?
on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Jan 2003, 6:44 PM
this would make a fuck of a villanelle, h
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
20 Jan 2003, 6:57 AM
why call it a villanelle when it's not? you've played that trick once already. it's not as funny the second time around.
but i like the poem.
but i like the poem.
on The Chastisement of Cupid by Thyme
20 Jan 2003, 7:47 AM
vivid and corporeal!
was it inspired by a painting?
was it inspired by a painting?
on Death by dougsoderstrom
16 Jan 2003, 9:03 AM
'blown' leaves the door open for more verse.
needs to be 'has blown' or 'blew'' methinks.
needs to be 'has blown' or 'blew'' methinks.
on what little I know by nentwined
19 Jan 2003, 7:19 PM
very nice.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 9:06 AM
interesting foray. thanks for sharing.
on some deleted poem
17 Jan 2003, 10:31 PM
i was really liking the way you playe with the structure, and transposed words--until the end! you will find it, richa. you are so very close now.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 8:29 PM
ftw
on Welsh Landscape Part One by Nicholas Jones
16 Jan 2003, 8:32 AM
amen.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 9:01 AM
was this a confession? or do you want to shape it a little more? solid flesh on these bones, acc. but it need a little more shaping to be a good read to those not privvy to your soul.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 8:38 AM
okay, the title makes it SO accessible, do you think it's too obvious now?
something like, 'asking for it, in a red cape'?
by the way, i think this is one of your finest. i have mostly stayed out of the comments because i felt i had nothing to add.
bullseye, mrs.g.
something like, 'asking for it, in a red cape'?
by the way, i think this is one of your finest. i have mostly stayed out of the comments because i felt i had nothing to add.
bullseye, mrs.g.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 11:25 PM
warp. weft. heft. theft. those neurochemicals, they're fleet afoot.
dream a little dream of crocheted knees.
dream a little dream of crocheted knees.
on dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY
17 Jan 2003, 10:27 AM
you sir, are the discarded molt of a milk snake.
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 1:22 PM