on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 10:53 AM
and i hear sheis insatiable.
on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT
26 Nov 2002, 7:15 PM
woo hoo! look who's back in the house!!!
go, boy!
okay, now the poem: the punctuation in the second stanza confuses me. do you need the comma after shoulder?
like the thought.
go, boy!
okay, now the poem: the punctuation in the second stanza confuses me. do you need the comma after shoulder?
like the thought.
on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8
26 Nov 2002, 7:35 PM
oh my. left coast strikes back. and makes me smile.
on Surface Damage by un4208
26 Nov 2002, 7:45 PM
very, very special. and your bus, among other things, is half the normal size, non?
on Boxers Over Y-Fronts by un4208
26 Nov 2002, 7:49 PM
so you wear your boxers over your y-fronts, that way, when a chick laughs at you for being small, you can blame it on your undergarments? GENIUS!!!
on With Sleepless Breath... by LovingWhispers
26 Nov 2002, 8:21 PM
a very comforting chant, but, this line feels awkward in sound: "When I think about us making love "
on ode to bacchus by daniella
26 Nov 2002, 8:24 PM
so, where have i heard that before? 'soulles goat', that is. i must have been bending too close to his brown eye. again. dammit. i love an asshole that can rhyme.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 1:14 PM
i prefer mine with a nice chianti.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 1:16 PM
in st louis this may, they had a 'hottest mom' contest. were you there? because it seemed like they wouldn't be keeping their pants up, from the tone of the ad.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 10:53 AM
where'd you sit? i was in 116...
graet show.
graet show.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 6:50 AM
jesu christu! make the ganglia twitch!
beneath that sultry exterior, the slowed beat of an icy heart...
nice rewrite, dewd.
beneath that sultry exterior, the slowed beat of an icy heart...
nice rewrite, dewd.
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2002, 3:27 PM
and pixels are worth...nothing at all.
on Wave to the starving children Miss Denmark. by horus8
24 Nov 2002, 3:51 PM
oy.
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2002, 3:57 PM
shit???
on Lloyd Street Interlude by jdsnyd
24 Nov 2002, 3:59 PM
do you cast a reflection?
on The Abyss of myself by ciantu
24 Nov 2002, 4:01 PM
funny how 3 of 4 of your poems have anonymous 10 votes...secret admirer, perchance? or not?
on Not God's Wife, Just a Girl by w~* ATHENA *~w
22 Nov 2002, 7:22 AM
like the way you start off innocent, and then throw in the etherised patient. insidious.
on some deleted poem
22 Nov 2002, 8:16 AM
rosemary's for remembrance, tint. why didn't you remember to end the flow with an ebb, instead of a jar?
on some deleted poem
22 Nov 2002, 8:13 AM
really, he's just an all-too-eager dauphin.