on Third Period English by Sawa
18 Mar 2003, 7:34 AM
without a second thought, that's how.
on Tell me I suck by Blindproject217
18 Mar 2003, 7:33 AM
when i saw the title, i wanted to SOOOO BADLY!!! but i just can't now.
still, there are gaping holes in this. sqeeze it alittle more--<drip, drip, drip> and see what there is to be seen when you unravel it a little more! bravo/a!
still, there are gaping holes in this. sqeeze it alittle more--<drip, drip, drip> and see what there is to be seen when you unravel it a little more! bravo/a!
on While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Mar 2003, 1:02 PM
hmm. not the cock i have been thinking on, but i can see how it works better for the poem that way.
:|
:|
on While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Mar 2003, 12:13 PM
dammit! again, you miss the chance for the rhyme!!!!!
on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
17 Mar 2003, 11:37 AM
on Triptych: Rural by lastobelus
16 Mar 2003, 5:15 PM
excellent ending line in 1. much more satisfying.
2 works better without the punctuation. good call.
3 has amused me.
2 works better without the punctuation. good call.
3 has amused me.
replying on hard as a rock by <~>
15 Mar 2003, 11:22 PM
just for you, yes.
do you mind sharing the spotlight? a little?
do you mind sharing the spotlight? a little?
replying on All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap
14 Mar 2003, 7:32 AM
metrify yourself.
form to follow function. this will help.
form to follow function. this will help.
replying on sexy by elizabethann
14 Mar 2003, 7:31 AM
zacklee
replying on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap
14 Mar 2003, 7:28 AM
you are mean because you are hard as a sock. and, really, haven't you been tugging off for much longer than that full year?
i noticed that stocks in moisturizing avocado "hand" creme have skyrocketed in the u.k.
huzzah!
i noticed that stocks in moisturizing avocado "hand" creme have skyrocketed in the u.k.
huzzah!
replying on hard as a rock by <~>
14 Mar 2003, 6:58 AM
that one's in the works, just for you, o mysterious one.
replying on sexy by elizabethann
14 Mar 2003, 6:54 AM
who says i'm not? a girl needs a hobby, luv.
replying on sexy by elizabethann
13 Mar 2003, 7:54 PM
you mean...she...got his goat?
<ugh>
<ugh>
on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap
13 Mar 2003, 7:46 PM
doing his master's bidding,
middenHeap's into the fray.
oy vey!
I suppose -that- no one really could
--will help the meter
When she over her cradle cooed
--i know what you mean, but it reads awkwardly
nice effort. excellent topic for a V. the grief-struck often do repeat and repeat, to force themselves to accept. very nice tie-in, there.
middenHeap's into the fray.
oy vey!
I suppose -that- no one really could
--will help the meter
When she over her cradle cooed
--i know what you mean, but it reads awkwardly
nice effort. excellent topic for a V. the grief-struck often do repeat and repeat, to force themselves to accept. very nice tie-in, there.
replying on hard as a rock by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 2:38 PM
i need more than 8, if you want a good spanking, baby.
replying on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 2:18 PM
just as i suspected.
on Strung by bunniesnangels
13 Mar 2003, 2:18 PM
this cries to me for more of a beat:
Women are pearls that you string,
Slid one to another with a satisfying "plink."
Each purchased alone, momentarily shone
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and so on.
somehow it makes it more vindictive for me that way. like you are ramming the words home, with each hard beat.
Women are pearls that you string,
Slid one to another with a satisfying "plink."
Each purchased alone, momentarily shone
-
and so on.
somehow it makes it more vindictive for me that way. like you are ramming the words home, with each hard beat.
replying on hard as a rock by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 2:12 PM
wrong is right, oh follower of the penultimate.
on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 2:05 PM
ARE YOU WEARING THE HORN-ED HAT, VALKYRIE????