| Re: a comment on Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/8:25 AM |
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v-this poem is fraught with mixed imagery. you mean to make it sorrowful, but the snowman with the swollen nose makes it comical. and, please, check your spelling. a 'sole' and a 'soul' are very different.
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| Re: One Country by poetandknowit |
14-Oct-02/8:20 AM |
'barren in bounty'--'barren, late of bounty'? the birdsong is a beautiful touch, as are the lips and hips and the promise of both. your aim is indeed true.
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| Re: Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/8:01 AM |
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my carp could conquer your sole any day. with his fins tied behind his back, even.
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| Re: a comment on quickie by <~> |
14-Oct-02/7:56 AM |
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thanks. it was just a quickie, after all. and sometimes, that's exactly what you need, know what i mean?
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| Re: Football by Tom Colebrooke |
14-Oct-02/7:41 AM |
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only a mere smackerel for me, roo
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| Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT |
14-Oct-02/7:19 AM |
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you only think i'm nice because you have ignored my comments.
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| Re: a comment on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~> |
14-Oct-02/6:23 AM |
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he had just been to see the bum doctor, you see.
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| Re: a comment on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~> |
13-Oct-02/4:21 PM |
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| Re: Bowstones, 21st June 200 by Nicholas Jones |
11-Oct-02/7:50 AM |
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please do stick with this, and steer clear of politics. you are so fucking good at sense of place.
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| Re: SO by Nicholas Jones |
11-Oct-02/7:48 AM |
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so. surreal. and concrete. and metal and blood and plastic and steam and vision. and haze. thorough.
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| Re: more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 |
11-Oct-02/7:22 AM |
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you are a naughty boy and you deserve to be spanked. have a 9. you'll have to get the 6 yourself.
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| Re: The Thought Of It by Christof |
10-Oct-02/1:42 PM |
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christof, you are honed razor sharp these days. i bled, reading this.
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| Re: a comment on A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator |
10-Oct-02/7:15 AM |
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to me, it seems like you have deemed her incapable of taking care of herself, or of making her own decisions.
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| Re: song of the birds by rainbow |
9-Oct-02/8:36 AM |
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how is this a song of birds? sounds more like a diary entry of a teenage girl who needs to get out and live a little.
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| Re: Haiku by heart |
9-Oct-02/8:32 AM |
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would be better if the first line had more 'rigid cadence'.
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| Re: Snack for the Shameless by New Life Drug |
9-Oct-02/8:28 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
8-Oct-02/7:58 AM |
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i have taken your suggestion ismael. but i think i shall leave the title, so the reader has some clue.
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| Re: a comment on Down Home by <~> |
7-Oct-02/8:32 PM |
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Ninoy_Instigator deletes comments, in caase anyone cares/
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| Re: a comment on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator |
7-Oct-02/8:24 PM |
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it's not that i took offense at you poem. i take offense at katie's senseless kowtowing to it. i am blonde. and it would take a hell of a lot to offend me.
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| Re: The day I told her by dalva |
7-Oct-02/8:20 AM |
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at least you had the balls to tell her.
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