replying on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 8:25 AM
v-this poem is fraught with mixed imagery. you mean to make it sorrowful, but the snowman with the swollen nose makes it comical. and, please, check your spelling. a 'sole' and a 'soul' are very different.
on One Country by poetandknowit
14 Oct 2002, 8:20 AM
'barren in bounty'--'barren, late of bounty'? the birdsong is a beautiful touch, as are the lips and hips and the promise of both. your aim is indeed true.
on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 8:01 AM
my carp could conquer your sole any day. with his fins tied behind his back, even.
on Football by Tom Colebrooke
14 Oct 2002, 7:41 AM
only a mere smackerel for me, roo
replying on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT
14 Oct 2002, 7:19 AM
you only think i'm nice because you have ignored my comments.
replying on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~>
14 Oct 2002, 6:23 AM
he had just been to see the bum doctor, you see.
replying on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~>
13 Oct 2002, 4:21 PM
he smelled--of bum.
on Bowstones, 21st June 200 by Nicholas Jones
11 Oct 2002, 7:50 AM
please do stick with this, and steer clear of politics. you are so fucking good at sense of place.
on SO by Nicholas Jones
11 Oct 2002, 7:48 AM
so. surreal. and concrete. and metal and blood and plastic and steam and vision. and haze. thorough.
on more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8
11 Oct 2002, 7:22 AM
you are a naughty boy and you deserve to be spanked. have a 9. you'll have to get the 6 yourself.
on The Thought Of It by Christof
10 Oct 2002, 1:42 PM
christof, you are honed razor sharp these days. i bled, reading this.
replying on A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator
10 Oct 2002, 7:15 AM
to me, it seems like you have deemed her incapable of taking care of herself, or of making her own decisions.
on song of the birds by rainbow
9 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
how is this a song of birds? sounds more like a diary entry of a teenage girl who needs to get out and live a little.
on Snack for the Shameless by New Life Drug
9 Oct 2002, 8:28 AM
yes. always so.
replying on Russian Roulette by <~>
8 Oct 2002, 7:58 AM
i have taken your suggestion ismael. but i think i shall leave the title, so the reader has some clue.
replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
7 Oct 2002, 8:24 PM
it's not that i took offense at you poem. i take offense at katie's senseless kowtowing to it. i am blonde. and it would take a hell of a lot to offend me.
on The day I told her by dalva
7 Oct 2002, 8:20 AM
at least you had the balls to tell her.