replying on Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville by <~>
2 Oct 2002, 2:59 PM
i'm gonna go have me some rare steak, and make up for lost time.
i love it when somebody else pays for me to learn, but damn, i better have lunch in the hotel tomorrow, because i don't think i can leave once i sit down to the music. shit. temptation on all sides.
i love it when somebody else pays for me to learn, but damn, i better have lunch in the hotel tomorrow, because i don't think i can leave once i sit down to the music. shit. temptation on all sides.
on Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus
30 Sep 2002, 3:54 PM
what, you don't call, you don't write--how was the show? all right?
replying on At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness
30 Sep 2002, 3:51 PM
and i bet you'd want more when she was done.
on Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus
30 Sep 2002, 3:41 PM
just get a little bottle, and you'll be okay
on always the end to this good night by nentwined
30 Sep 2002, 3:39 PM
weaves and bobs aprropriately.
on Can't See by ThoughtfulSoul
30 Sep 2002, 12:15 PM
try banging your head against a wall. then you can see colors, too, and not just black.
on the room's a'spinnin' by nentwined
30 Sep 2002, 12:12 PM
i want more impact on line 3, pretty please.
on Bobbing for Apples by Rex Karrs
30 Sep 2002, 9:33 AM
more's the pity--he'll be having his eye on another prize, won't he?
amalea, please understand that i do not mean this to be mean, but you should not use words that you don't understand. you have a LOT to say. you are very fiery in your rebuttals, and part of the reason you are teased/drawn out/whatever is that you do fight back. why not write in your own words? there is much beauty to be had in everyday things, and you are young and have a fresh and optimistics eyes. write about the boys who vie for you. they entertain and flatter you. but please, don't try to write to impress. write to communicate. you are good at it, but in adopting these style which do not fit you, you do yourself a disservice. peace. z
on Hunter's Moon by Rex Karrs
27 Sep 2002, 8:53 PM
by the way, this is quite beautiful.
on beauty of senses by apples_tim
27 Sep 2002, 7:58 PM
i'm wondering why one would write yet another sunset poem, without a very specific something to say? i almost feel like you are asking us to live this moment for you. you lived it--you tell us what irt was like, okay?
on Witch to Wicca by Lenore
27 Sep 2002, 7:55 PM
lenore, i like this, but i feel like you have mixed strong metaophor in with some much weaker passages. i would like to see it hones and stronger, more like an incantation: direct and powerful, as it could well be.
replying on Witch to Wicca by Lenore
27 Sep 2002, 7:53 PM
it is not to be missed, mrs.g. it is simple and effective. and science fiction.
replying on Witch to Wicca by Lenore
27 Sep 2002, 7:50 PM
frass, skyclad rocks, although i'm not much for cloudbursting. 'tis child's play. speaking of popping up, where have you been lately? z
on esopus creek by unknown
27 Sep 2002, 7:31 PM
damn wriggling winker got away again, didn't he? the wee bastard!
on Hunter's Moon by Rex Karrs
27 Sep 2002, 7:17 PM
bravo rex. so nice to see you here. glad you could make it. welcome to my world. nice entrance. etc.
replying on A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom
27 Sep 2002, 9:01 AM
not as gods, no. to me, they are mere flesh and bone.
on Cover song by bondjedi
27 Sep 2002, 7:46 AM
you just can't stop yourself, can you?
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