on plagiarism txt by daniella
5 Sep 2003, 9:02 AM
cute.
replying on plagiarism txt by daniella
5 Sep 2003, 9:02 AM
so now I ask what has you flying ot these pastures new, eh? what can _The Critical Poet_ do for you that poemranker can't? Hell, we can even flag you a wanker for all to see an' it move you. :)
la.
la.
on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer
4 Sep 2003, 9:04 PM
you know, this is kinda fun. :) I like.
replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
4 Sep 2003, 5:20 PM
I was torn on that. I couldn't decide whether 'come' was actually 'valid', or if it was only, properly, 'cum'. Finally (as you can see) just went with the word I was sure of.
replying on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom
15 Aug 2003, 4:40 PM
funny how averages work, neh? I see it's back up there.
replying on for sue (20030815) by nentwined
15 Aug 2003, 3:31 PM
'We want Information...Information...Information.
'Who are you?'
'The new Letter B.'
'Who is Letter A?'
'You are Letter K.'
'I am not a letter - I am a free Man!'
[[laughter]]
BAKA! ;)
'Who are you?'
'The new Letter B.'
'Who is Letter A?'
'You are Letter K.'
'I am not a letter - I am a free Man!'
[[laughter]]
BAKA! ;)
on Sir Psycho Sexy by DreamerSupreme
15 Aug 2003, 3:30 PM
ew.
replying on for sue (20030815) by nentwined
15 Aug 2003, 2:54 PM
Muahahah! I wiN!111!
on The truth about our friend Horus by Sir.Psycho.Sexy
15 Aug 2003, 2:35 PM
a little fuller than your other ditty, but I feel it falls apart all over the place.
on A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy
15 Aug 2003, 2:34 PM
plain/simple. not very imaginative, but the rhymes don't hurt.
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
31 Jul 2003, 8:24 AM
testing self-comment.
on Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66
14 Jul 2003, 1:52 PM
? :) definitely a mindtwister for me. I can't find the rhythm (is stepped one or two syllables in your reading? (not that I can find it either way, but I'm curious as to the "tone" there))
la la la! :)
does six-stepped mean something?
ooh. What's a Bombi? (I read that as Bambi at least 7 times. it now makes less sense but in a clearer way (I couldn't figure out where a deer was coming from).
la la la. :)
la la la! :)
does six-stepped mean something?
ooh. What's a Bombi? (I read that as Bambi at least 7 times. it now makes less sense but in a clearer way (I couldn't figure out where a deer was coming from).
la la la. :)
on Omerta el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
10 Jul 2003, 4:40 PM
"holding the letter with a bottle" -> "it slowly slips out" sounds like the letter slips out. but it shatters. ?
beyond that, rather nice. :)
beyond that, rather nice. :)
replying on you will feel by nentwined
7 Jul 2003, 7:50 AM
Not exactly an analogy; this, now that the category has been created, should more properly be a "pimple poem". It was meant to be a condensed version, saying more the intent of such poems than actually trying to mimic the style. "You hurt me, but I can hurt me more! But I want you to feel my pain! Please? Ha, I'll show you!" :/
on Life's sad song by Brian Tiensvold
26 Jun 2003, 9:44 AM
Behold, the massive whitehead!
replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
4 Jun 2003, 10:57 PM
nope. wrote it all by hand. perseverence. ;)
on The boy by geewhiz1962
4 Jun 2003, 10:10 PM
"a heir" -> "an heir"
You might try getting someone to read this aloud to you, and pick out where the flow seems off. (I stumbled all over the place; nearly broke an 'ankle').
And I'm not all too into the "I must capitalize the first word of every line and put a period at the end". It doesn't "go with the flow" for me. Lots of sentences arbitrarily chopped...
You might try getting someone to read this aloud to you, and pick out where the flow seems off. (I stumbled all over the place; nearly broke an 'ankle').
And I'm not all too into the "I must capitalize the first word of every line and put a period at the end". It doesn't "go with the flow" for me. Lots of sentences arbitrarily chopped...
replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
4 Jun 2003, 3:06 PM
:heheh: I'll consider it. And I've not listened to it again, yet, but I *think* you missed one of the "banging"s. ;) Maybe it was a silent "Aaaaaaaaaaaargh!".