Re: plagiarism txt by daniella	5-Sep-03/9:02 AM
cute.
Re: a comment on plagiarism txt by daniella	5-Sep-03/9:02 AM
so now I ask what has you flying ot these pastures new, eh? what can _The Critical Poet_ do for you that poemranker can't? Hell, we can even flag you a wanker for all to see an' it move you. :) la.
Re: Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer	4-Sep-03/9:04 PM
you know, this is kinda fun. :) I like.
Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Sep-03/5:20 PM
I was torn on that. I couldn't decide whether 'come' was actually 'valid', or if it was only, properly, 'cum'. Finally (as you can see) just went with the word I was sure of.
Re: a comment on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom	15-Aug-03/4:40 PM
funny how averages work, neh? I see it's back up there.
Re: a comment on for sue (20030815) by nentwined	15-Aug-03/3:31 PM
'We want Information...Information...Information.' 'Who are you?' 'The new Letter B.' 'Who is Letter A?' 'You are Letter K.' 'I am not a letter - I am a free Man!' [[laughter]] BAKA! ;)
Re: Sir Psycho Sexy by DreamerSupreme	15-Aug-03/3:30 PM
ew.
Re: a comment on for sue (20030815) by nentwined	15-Aug-03/2:54 PM
Muahahah! I wiN!111!
Re: The truth about our friend Horus by Sir.Psycho.Sexy	15-Aug-03/2:35 PM
a little fuller than your other ditty, but I feel it falls apart all over the place.
Re: A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy	15-Aug-03/2:34 PM
plain/simple. not very imaginative, but the rhymes don't hurt.
Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined	31-Jul-03/8:24 AM
testing self-comment.
Re: a comment on Acoustic by zzinnia66	14-Jul-03/2:03 PM
:heh: I see. Yes, yes you do. :)
Re: Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66	14-Jul-03/1:52 PM
? :) definitely a mindtwister for me. I can't find the rhythm (is stepped one or two syllables in your reading? (not that I can find it either way, but I'm curious as to the "tone" there)) la la la! :) does six-stepped mean something? ooh. What's a Bombi? (I read that as Bambi at least 7 times. it now makes less sense but in a clearer way (I couldn't figure out where a deer was coming from). la la la. :)
Re: Acoustic by zzinnia66	14-Jul-03/1:49 PM
blue? very pretty. but once more I show my ignorance--I don't get it.
Re: Omerta el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	10-Jul-03/4:40 PM
"holding the letter with a bottle" -> "it slowly slips out" sounds like the letter slips out. but it shatters. ? beyond that, rather nice. :)
Re: a comment on you will feel by nentwined	7-Jul-03/7:50 AM
Not exactly an analogy; this, now that the category has been created, should more properly be a "pimple poem". It was meant to be a condensed version, saying more the intent of such poems than actually trying to mimic the style. "You hurt me, but I can hurt me more! But I want you to feel my pain! Please? Ha, I'll show you!" :/
Re: Life's sad song by Brian Tiensvold	26-Jun-03/9:44 AM
Behold, the massive whitehead!
Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Jun-03/10:57 PM
nope. wrote it all by hand. perseverence. ;)
Re: The boy by geewhiz1962	4-Jun-03/10:10 PM
"a heir" -> "an heir" You might try getting someone to read this aloud to you, and pick out where the flow seems off. (I stumbled all over the place; nearly broke an 'ankle'). And I'm not all too into the "I must capitalize the first word of every line and put a period at the end". It doesn't "go with the flow" for me. Lots of sentences arbitrarily chopped...
Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Jun-03/3:06 PM
:heheh: I'll consider it. And I've not listened to it again, yet, but I *think* you missed one of the "banging"s. ;) Maybe it was a silent "Aaaaaaaaaaaargh!".