on ANGel R U by EaH4life
13 Nov 2003, 7:55 PM
Perfect.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 2:38 PM
Are your poems recieving 0's or 10's. Because every one of my poems all day have been being systematically mangled with 0's and if yours are being hit with tens. Then you my friend are a dick face, and are rockmage and sliver.
on Call Vegas!!! by INTRANSIT
14 Nov 2003, 2:39 PM
I notice you're in Cahouts too, tsk.
on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
14 Nov 2003, 2:46 PM
ha ha ha you are giving yourself 10's too what a bunch of sad scoundrels.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 2:50 PM
yours too.
on some deleted poem
16 Nov 2003, 1:27 AM
You make me want to end my life with a large orange construction cone wedged up into my ass hole by a jet engine John. Aint THat Ace!
on Watching My Son Sleep. by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:34 AM
Classy. I wish my mom was normal like that a lot.
on Memorial Park by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:36 AM
Bring your in and your to together. Other than that, increase your verb power and symbolism. For instance? Who is he. Where is the park? who's us?
on The Burial by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:37 AM
Cliche, but honest.
on Behind My Blue Eyes (rough draft) by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:39 AM
You are unique, and I need not tell you why. you are a wonderful mother, and an exceptional lover.
on Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:41 AM
Perfect. 10! Bachian swagger award.
on Man & Woman by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:47 AM
I know the feeling. I'm a male prostitute.
on < A Perfect Faith > by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:47 AM
Hilarious.
on *******Perfect***** by Mona Lisa
16 Nov 2003, 1:48 AM
Off.
on An Online Junkie Confesses by Jigg
16 Nov 2003, 2:14 AM
Ha ja ha ha ha!