replying on For you, I'd make meatloaf by Venus
14 Feb 2003, 10:22 AM
I agree. Thanks!
on Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof
2 Oct 2002, 11:58 PM
8/10
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof
2 Oct 2002, 11:41 PM
8/10
on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
2 Oct 2002, 11:39 PM
8/10
on Fraternity by Christof
2 Oct 2002, 11:37 PM
9/10
on Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom
2 Oct 2002, 11:36 PM
8/10
on Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8
2 Oct 2002, 11:20 PM
9/10
on Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit
2 Oct 2002, 11:18 PM
8/10
on Variance of the tapeworm by horus8
31 Aug 2002, 3:07 PM
Yeah, fucking hypocrites! Nice jab, h. 9/10! How about another line, beginning with 'If you're such a poet....... '
on A journey to the sun by kawakurdi
31 Aug 2002, 2:49 PM
Reminds me of a Third Eye Blind song called 'Wounded', which I really dig. Not sure about the 'Hooray, hooray, hooray' bit, but great images and overall I like it very much. 9/10
on Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus
31 Aug 2002, 1:32 PM
Shit, I can't stop now, my old buddy Axl is coming on soon, can't miss that... v luv b luv h luv b~y
on Intense Irrational Realities by Venus
31 Aug 2002, 1:22 PM
Damn, those are good suggestions too. Wonder how many times I'll have to revise this thing before I get it...
on Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus
31 Aug 2002, 1:17 PM
How did I ever miss this little gem from the God of Spilled Wine??? You know, I paid a visit to Bacchus last year in Firenze - Michelangelo's version anyway - my favorite wino right up close and personal! Me-O-My! I was so inspired I drank three bottles of chianti that day (rather than the usual two). Just have the show on in the background right now, a train wreck I can't help but peek at. You make good observations, and hey, at least the show inspired you to write a piece. Thoughts so far: Pink - henna tats all over her body; faux ink - how telling. What's up with the token little white boy on stage with all the brothers, everyone pretending he can dance? The Hives - hey, isn't that Beck singing? Hmm, sure looks like Beck, moves like Beck, oh wait, no, can't be, cuz Beck is Prince, no wait, oh, fuck it, I'm confused... 7/10
on Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8
31 Aug 2002, 12:31 PM
Indeed I'm a mad mongrel mix like yourself - Russian & Greek from Mom's side, French & Indian from Dad's... your basic lover/fighter mixed breed. The lemono is my specialty all-winter-long soup, makes me feel all warm and snuggly during those cold and snowy Colorado winters. Just getting around to watching the music awards finally - oh that little Marshall Mathers, ya gotta love him! h luv v.
on Terror Too Tranquil by RaychelW
31 Aug 2002, 7:47 AM
Your poems have an easy flow. This is good work. 8/10
on Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8
31 Aug 2002, 7:37 AM
I have indeed succumbed - it was that German chocolate cake what made me do it! BTW, here's a slight twist to try on your next batch of Avgolemono - add fresh chopped parsley to the broth and rice prior to adding the eggs (nice color splash & enhanced flavor), and use the juice of TWO lemons... mmm mmm, lemono good! And thanks for the compliment on my hair, I really was having a 'great hair day' yesterday. Hope they do a good job on your cut ; ) 8/10
on The boy who shot birds by Bachus
30 Aug 2002, 3:39 PM
This is great stuff - grrrrrreat! Thought-provoking commentary with a perfect opening companion piece of poetry. I hear you loud and clear. And I hate that fucker, too. 9/10
on Intense Irrational Realities by Venus
30 Aug 2002, 1:52 PM
Z - took your initial suggestions, thanks again!