replying on Nina Simone (part one) by zodiac
5 Feb 2004, 3:32 PM
I just sent it. Hit me back to let me know if you got it.
replying on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
5 Feb 2004, 3:25 PM
of course, now I see that it was from a different isp..are there two dark angel's? If so, my bad. I apologize even more. :D
replying on Nina Simone (part one) by zodiac
5 Feb 2004, 3:16 PM
zodiac...nope, not at all. It's an MSN group/workshop, a private one which you have to apply to join. Recommendations help. You've definitely got mine lol. It does require a rather extensive submissions package to get in (to judge both talent and more importantly your ability to give and receive critique, which you seem fine with from what I've seen here.) Is the email address you have listed here valid? If so, I'll email you again shortly with the details. If not let me know where to send it.
Nance
Nance
replying on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
5 Feb 2004, 3:13 PM
darkangel..okay that soapbox comment was a bit out of line. I said it cuz i figured you'd get all pissy about my 'utterly ridiculous' comment (which i still have to stand by, sorry, lol). That assumption was based on the whole 'i hate you i hate you i hate you' thing i got from you my first time here because you didn't agree with a suggestion I made to someone else. Figured i'd get something similar here :D But I apologize, i'll keep it to the poetry.
Lasto..hmm...um, yeah, I believe I did acknowledge that it was humorous. I just couldn't take it seriously enough. Way to stand up for the regulars though. You're doing great.
Lasto..hmm...um, yeah, I believe I did acknowledge that it was humorous. I just couldn't take it seriously enough. Way to stand up for the regulars though. You're doing great.
replying on Nina Simone (part one) by zodiac
5 Feb 2004, 3:08 PM
ah. i sent you one like a week ago or so to the address you had listed here asking if you'd be interested in an online writer's workshop. I think you'd be good there. Some talented writers and honest, detailed critique/feedback.
And ah. that was in response to one of the dark angel's "i hate you i hate you blah blah blah" cuz they didn't agree with a suggestion i made to someone else my first time here. kinda immature, no? But yeah i'll keep my comments to the poetry. heh.
And ah. that was in response to one of the dark angel's "i hate you i hate you blah blah blah" cuz they didn't agree with a suggestion i made to someone else my first time here. kinda immature, no? But yeah i'll keep my comments to the poetry. heh.
on Castaway by andrewjthomas
5 Feb 2004, 2:42 PM
Well-written. You created your own form, huh. Impressive. Really. Nice job.
on Gardener by lastobelus
5 Feb 2004, 2:35 PM
well written with good imagery and a touch of humor...I like it.
on Duck - an ode by zodiac
5 Feb 2004, 2:33 PM
This is not up to par with the other stuff i've read of yours, but then again, it did accomplish what I see it was meant to, and you did give it your own unique twist. Cute.
on La Belle Epoque by andrewjthomas
5 Feb 2004, 2:29 PM
The length and formatting of this piece make it rather intimidating to read. Eh, I don't know if intimidating is the right word. It just 'looks' like I would have a real hard time getting through it. But I read it anyway and a lot of the content is brilliant. Very unique and talented piece of writing, other than the aforementioned formatting problem :D I like this a lot though. I think most of the specifics I would have pointed out were already pointed out by zodiac. Otherwise, this is great. I really enjoyed it.
on A Panglossian Farmer by richa
5 Feb 2004, 2:20 PM
Nice. I like this one.
on Necromancers Song (Incubus Guitar & Buddhist Drums) by SupremeDreamer
5 Feb 2004, 2:19 PM
This reads well. Love S2. Good imagery. I like it.
on To A Streetchild by Sam
5 Feb 2004, 2:17 PM
ah, my comments would fit right in there with the ones already given. Pretty good, though.
on Soft Beak; Hard lotion by Bachus
5 Feb 2004, 2:15 PM
lol..oh man. kinda crude to poke fun at the 13 year old's attempt...but that was funny and you've definitely got talent. There's lots of good stuff in here. Thoroughly entertaining.
on Notes toward a possible poem by Nicholas Jones
5 Feb 2004, 2:08 PM
not bad..heh funny last line.
on Something's gone wrong by zodiac
5 Feb 2004, 2:07 PM
what can I say. Love your writing. Another great piece. (Er, can someone tell me just what a "pimple" is? LOL Thanks in advance). zodiac, you'd be great in that workshop i mentioned. Not interested...?
on Digging A Grave by Billy Biff-Chin
5 Feb 2004, 2:01 PM
the rhyme scheme is too forced and 'immature.' you expressed your sentiments just fine.
on bluebells and none by richa
5 Feb 2004, 1:44 PM
Simplistic, but in a good way. I like this one. "crows" should be "crow's." I'd also throw a period after "...it was not stealing."
on A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
5 Feb 2004, 1:42 PM
cute. can't take it seriously enough to really crit, but it's cute. in its own odd way.
on Homeland Security by Lenore
5 Feb 2004, 1:41 PM
Not bad...pretty well written, but I'd echo Rockmage and Zodiac's sentiments.
on Some people don't know when to quit by Joe-joe
5 Feb 2004, 1:38 PM
This is cute and pretty well written. Entertaining read.