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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
2-May-04/7:32 PM |
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ggawrysi 147.9.151.22 |
2-May-04/11:19 AM |
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the justin cress theme is a little redundant
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| Re: Loss by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
2-May-04/9:16 AM |
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Very good, especially the last line. some will argue that it's not a ghazal, but I don't care, the thing resonates with me.
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
2-May-04/9:29 AM |
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some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
2-May-04/9:32 AM |
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What happened to your other recent poem, the one I said was absolutely profound? You're not playing with my head again are you?
No matter, this poem is beautifully spring and feminine.
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ggawrysi 147.9.151.22 |
2-May-04/11:17 AM |
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a dificult word to use, i like it
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ggawrysi 147.9.151.22 |
2-May-04/11:17 AM |
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may fit better as a pimple, despite its acrosticness (word?)
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| Re: Falling by QuirkyWonder |
etherealmaiden 66.71.73.78 |
2-May-04/12:31 PM |
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very cute. I like the thought of both falling in love at the same time. :)
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zodiac 152.30.88.157 |
2-May-04/3:37 PM |
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"Yet her motives are strong" is terrible cop-talk.
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| Re: The Brigadier's Motto by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
zodiac 152.30.88.157 |
2-May-04/3:43 PM |
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"...Nor was the sixteenth-century sodomite a homosexual. In 1631, Mervyn Touchet, Earl of Castlehaven, was tried and executed for sodomy. It is clear from the proceedings that the earl was not understood by himself or anyone else to be a particular kind of sexual individual. ... The earl did not slip into his tightest doublet and waltz down to the nearest gay tavern to mingle with his fellow sodomists. He stayed in the manor house and buggered his servants. Gay self-awareness, gay pubs, the sense of group commonality, and even the term homosexual were not part of the earl's universe."
- Gayle Rubin, Thinking Sex: Notes for a Radical Theory of the Politics of Sexuality
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some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
2-May-04/4:22 PM |
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Good foreshadowing with "underestimating." A tale so unlikey it must be sadly true.
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| Re: the beale street mud festival. by wilco |
some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
2-May-04/4:25 PM |
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Funny, because I wasn't there. Still, I remember the thunderstorms of a Tennessee summer evening.
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INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68 |
2-May-04/3:56 PM |
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Oh no I've gone cross-eyed!!!!
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
2-May-04/4:00 PM |
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Paying $25 to slosh around in the mud and rain and the only thing that you get to see is Jerry Lee Lewis perform "Great Balls of Fire". Now that's absurd.
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| Re: Black Belt by etherealmaiden |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
2-May-04/4:01 PM |
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This seems to be a statement on anorexia nervosa, no?
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
2-May-04/4:04 PM |
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I don't much care for the month of May, myself (except for the fifteenth...oh, and the twenty-third, those days are, ok). Good one.
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| Re: the beale street mud festival. by wilco |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68 |
2-May-04/5:29 PM |
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(Journey) Ha! What beautiful irony.
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| Re: Loss by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68 |
2-May-04/5:35 PM |
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You swim so fluidly through the murky waters of your past. My past, not so murky, not clear either.
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
2-May-04/7:29 PM |
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Stanza four is quite lovely.
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| Re: Call of the Marine by ggawrysi |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
2-May-04/7:31 PM |
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Not loving the brain/slain rhyme.
The acrostic"ness" is extremely smooth however, so ju get a tenspot from me.
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