JoyLuck
on a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jul 2003, 1:45 AM
lol??
Wow, that was fucking horrible. Here's an 11!
Geomancy, good stuff.
bueno.
galumphingly good.
short and sweet.
i am amazed
Very good. You are making huge strides forward. Keep up the good work. 10
A very mysterious 6 for you, I think.
A wonderful thought.
I like this, but I don't understand why it's called Pretzel. Nevertheless... I think a bit of bile is good, dactylic or otherwise
Hippo manure grows things well, but they kill their young.
Very good, I'm proud of you, you've done it.
First is 19
second is 18
the third is right on, at 17
excellente.
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but your use of words such as... the "n word" and others disturbs me greatly. I'm just a repressed politically correct canuck I guess.
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Um.. cmon you damned lil pink rodent, you should be improving, not writing the mumbles of a sickened rabbit suffering poetic rejection... 3
Mirror mirror on the wall who is the superman of them all? "Woody Allen with a ten inch nigger dick". "My heart belongs to daddy" Cole porter! Cole Porter!
Damn! Seven more years.
Show me the leader whose eyes can withstand
The gaze of dead faces that leather in sand.
Blood on the lintel, and bile upon mat,
This is the suite where bellies grow fat.
Crimp the young shoots and press on by the nose,
Shiny green beetles shall devour your rose.
lol.. well.. repulsive, slightly amusing and well written.. 7.
Although this is not my favourite of yours it is another fine example of your knack for taking the real and the possible and making them one.