Caducus
on the feeling was never there by blackball
20 Dec 2002, 4:43 AM
Distinctive,poignant a fine read -8-
better
its grrreat but to be honnest the ending wasnt as good as the main body but even so worth everysingle point of the ten it got
hehehehe quite insane, thats why i like it, a bit solpcistic though deserves a 9 but ill give you a 10
Aaaarrrggghhhh, watch out, Red_Neck's about to submit another one! Hide away everybody!
(Merry Christmas once again!)
Not bad, my friend, not bad at all. I like the line "praying for a moment..."
8/10
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 4:21 AM
Stamp, you dirty freak!! But otherwise very good!!
Oh wow, this is superb! I really love the last stanza-have a ten!
Merry Christmas and a happy New Year!
Bugger, I'm agreeing with poetandknowit! This is incredible, thank you NLD!
I gotta love ya ! wonder how many kids twisters spawned?
a good poem but marred by interruptions while reading due to the grammar, spelling. I too have been damned for the same wrong, not bad -6-
Sustained mood and well composed, albei more style than substance, good poem and welcome to p/r -7-
well.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
i'll drink some skaldic brew to that.the titles kind of pauly shore, but the piece is impeccable..
Utter stupidity. do you really think we give a shit about your urinary tract. Come on show some depth.
Have you ever considered learning to spell before subjecting us to this crap?
If you're going to steal REM's lyrics, please at least try to disguise them. Even better, DON'T STEAL THEM AT ALL!
Well now...