Bill Z Bub
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
19 Dec 2002, 7:41 PM
groovadelic
<scottish accent> Grrrreat title. Grrrrrrrrreat. </scottish accent>
One problem: trees are not immortal. They just live a really long time. But don't let that stop you, dude. I wouldn't.
its got a beat, you can dance to it,
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
worthy of a LOL,
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
Hot for teacher? Definitely a thinker.
hated it
I counted 20 spelling errors. Do I win a prize? Is he a mad genius or just in need of a spellchecker?
Keep working on it. It's starting to shape up nicely.
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...
"eat my nuts"? I have to listen to that all day at work! I don't want to have to listen to that when I come home to poemranker!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
women are trully flowers tho only the type that have thorns and thats what makes them so perfect
buety and strength all in such an inviting package
im lost give me a thought that inspired you
I think you'll find that the plural form of "supernova" is "supernovae". Good day to you, Sir!
Very zen-like in meaning. The whole is infinitely more than
the sum of its parts and I assign you a nine. Good Stuff!!
anything but a crying clown, lordy. "Fresh washed flora covered with grime". funny. quantum physics aye. jesus. here, i got one for you. i walked inside just to be let out. because...well..the cosmic dance said i could.
"Of Jesue Christ will little think" this is my feel good sentence of the week lol, and for that you my friend get the kale GUN on full automatic!calcium rich greeness, all for you, and later if your lucky i'll let you scrub my hoof. change air to dirt, christmas to labor day, and bethlem to bangcock to really get the gelt of it.
"sweatness of death" vintage.