THIS HURTS.

sorry, umm. no thanks. :) [or is that: no! down boy, down! no sun/son for you today!]

interesting. I'd like these three images to be more intertwined, somehow. 7

sorry. umm. it's pretty, but I couldn't make my way through "yet another seasons poem" (though I know I'm also to blame for writing such things...) maybe if you clothed it more esoterically, or obfuscated it through stronger metaphor?

love is definitely a word used too much. especially for poems. I'd recommend trying to work on the rhythm of this piece so that it flows more naturally. (try reading it outloud and see where you stumble... count syllables and compare stress if you're really bored...) beyond that, eh.

Singular "ether" maybe? Your last line--the change in rhythm--seems to fall flat. I like the idea of this a lot, just needs some refining, I think.

bare -> bear. seems a little forced, and the rhythm fell apart here and there... I can't say I took anything from it.

I wrote like this when I was in middleschool. I liked it then.

a try. I like the sentiment of the last line and how it puts some twist on the rest, but... the rhymes feel canned, the rhythm flat...

"In your shoes I'll walk a mile" -- this line made me stop reading. a) forced into a 'poetic' form, b) cliche. try to say it some other way? or simpler?

cute, but the last stanza didn't wrap it together for me. 6

this isn't amazingly original, but it's very pretty; well done, really. 8

too high-and-mighty-for me. eh. felt like bad death metal lyrics, honestly, even with the "postitive" tone.

very well done. 9

good surreal, but no rhyming?

hmm.

I almost REALLY like this. :/ it doesn't flow pleasantly for me, but ... almost. 7

cute. well done. :) 9

cubefarm. eh.

the sea!