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on Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w
19 Sep 2002, 12:24 AM
end it with read the news a little to much lately without opening my eyes.? just riffing who knows.
ral tight cunt muscles here...how about (stilling) instead..still real smart...8.
truth my son...will set you free. Champagne and vasoline addictions are hard to come by.. you'll see. I like it. I like the honesty (more)...and contentment that i see (and feel) from now on. 7
Awww. I like this poem shadow! Cute, sweet, it's just awwww. LoL. good work. 9/10
*snif, snif* It's so...beautiful. I like!! 9/10
Whatever it is you make me want it ! Please clear up the typos as it detracts from some well penned material.
sensless=senseless. Also better is ...I am AS real as a toothache..
Also ..I am better THAN any treasure.
"Stubborn and exquisite" reminded me of dear Emily D . 9/10
This poem does not lack experience-9/10
And it was good
I can smell it, is this autobiographical ?- 10/10
Bet that's a potent musical piece..8/10
I let loose a night's worth of drinking on the neck and hair of
an unsuspecting girl at a Green Day
show and slowly left before she
noticed. your poem brings all that
back. thank you. should loose read the news and end on "paid my dues".
still nice. 8
LMAO!!!!
keep up the good work!!
all right i guess not my style tho needs more abstract i think
Great stuff as usual. This sounds like the song of Everywoman.
I think you just need some friends....
Uncles are rarely trustworthy. Keep your distance.
heh heh....you funny
well cute (don't tell ne1 im a boy)
fantastic