darylchew
on Haiku by Cha no Onna
28 Aug 2004, 2:17 AM
nice.
weird. not good.
true.
...reminds me of her.
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection.
but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night
To remind me of you"
i love it
Lachrymose means cause of tears
great! i agree
cute
great job!! i love it!
i can really relate to your poem coz im on an ldr
I'm sorry that was the best you could do - I forgive you lack of thought.
Would it really matter if it was a pimple?
Spank you Mr.London!I'll send you a new boy when I can.