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david replying on touch of the grass by david 4 Jul 2003, 7:24 PM
Much obliged, my good man.
Bill Z Bub on Untitled #13 by david 4 Jul 2003, 7:21 PM
the story of an altarboy who wore white too long. Then one day he got gangrene and his toes rotted off, each little piggy one by one falling and collected in a basket that he keeps in the back of a cupboard. Just don't let the earwigs in. They have a knack for pinching what little memory is left. Hmm, I see you've been around a while. But I don't think I've read any poems of yours before today. Oh here's a Ten --> 10.
Bill Z Bub on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Jul 2003, 7:13 PM
I saw an amazing movie last night.: "Frida". Ah, Salma baby, I don't know wether to salute or cry. Or both. Hey do you ever stop writing? Didn't think so. Is okay if I tape this to my bathroom mirror and repeat it to myself every morning?
Bill Z Bub on touch of the grass by david 4 Jul 2003, 7:08 PM
Green teeth. Exquisite. I raise my coffee cup to you, sir. Salut! This is what happens when I'm away from this site for a month.
Bill Z Bub on Death on my arm by INTRANSIT 4 Jul 2003, 7:03 PM
nice minimalist piece ** I've been away far too long ** and anarchy has descended on rancid mustard wings ** also, I'm getting published ** hooray, I am semi-semi-professional **
INTRANSIT on Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Jul 2003, 4:50 PM
Nobody does it better. Nebarska. No a/c. Hotel 'puter. Shouldst I say HOSTILE? Life sucks without the 'ranker.
Stephen Robins replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck 4 Jul 2003, 4:01 PM
wanker.
Stephen Robins on Junior Trees by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 4 Jul 2003, 3:56 PM
This is uite simply briliant, how are you doing steve ?I have been drinking now for six hours and I hope you are still at work mofo.
david on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II 4 Jul 2003, 3:46 PM
I'm reminded of how Aristotle once said that man, like elephants and bees, are inherently political animals.
david replying on Night Letter to Yahweh by david 4 Jul 2003, 3:34 PM
HUT?
david replying on granite hearts by david 4 Jul 2003, 2:07 PM
Thank you. Much obliged.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Ionic Winter by david 4 Jul 2003, 1:57 PM
Crafty.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on granite hearts by david 4 Jul 2003, 1:55 PM
Yeah, you're a really good poet. Superb collection really.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Night Letter to Yahweh by david 4 Jul 2003, 1:54 PM
You're good. Have A HUT awarde. 10
<{Baba^Yaga}> on of the bad hard drive by david 4 Jul 2003, 1:52 PM
lol.
david on Killbirds by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Jul 2003, 1:38 PM
I'm inclined to give a higher rating, if only because vilanelles are so difficult to write well. You've taken to the structure, and the narrative flow of the piece is intriguing.
richa on Untitled #13 by david 4 Jul 2003, 1:36 PM
reads well. heavily influenced by biblical imagery I think painful in nature/ubiquitous in effect is a nice play on words nice simple words to build a picture, not too tied to loaded terms
david on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Jul 2003, 1:28 PM
The repetition in this piece is delightful and well-crafted. There are certainly many cases of repetition ruining a poem, but this certainly isn't one of them.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Untitled #13 by david 4 Jul 2003, 1:16 PM
Profound.
david on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck 4 Jul 2003, 1:14 PM
A wonderful piece in the tradition of concrete and typographical poetry. Well done.