horus8
on Red Skies and Thunderflies by intheailse
28 Mar 2003, 1:51 PM
The good part must come after the ........ huh?
Good grief.
Ha Ha! asl. This is my United states of renigger.
Fag killer. Tough guy. Bible quoter. Chirp.
Blind project's right guys! Wow! What a clear and obviously wonderful spun around idea, unless saddam's gay then you're gay and we're'll doomed. Cheers Blind project! You win the horus8 "I quote the bible award to project my deepest darkest fears and misconceptions in order to divert the attention to everything i have not taking even a glimpse of time to understand, and from my own actions". Now ironically, you Bush, and Saddam, all have something clinical in common other then finger banging your own asses while you shower under the pretense that cleanliness in godliness. That would be faggotry to the 'enth degree of pecker and boob covering to the likes of which even Ashcrofts office has yet to witness. Button pushers and sissys the lot of you.
re: my point #3:
good thing he didn't say anything about ranking!!!!!
thank you for illustrating my point for me.
you might want to investigate some facts yourself, sir.
i chose 3 to illustrate myself:
1. god did not 'write' the bible. he doesn't take up paper and pen, or at least i've not heard of him doing so. to whit:
"Little is known for certain about the authorship of most books of the Bible. Broadly speaking, there's often a "traditional" view and a "scholarly" view, but the arguments are entirely from internal evidence and beliefs. There is no external, independent evidence of authorship or dating of these books. If you have five scholars in a room, you'll get seven different theories. "
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Alright zz66 Ill break it down for you, first off, what you said about God making homos and it being alright is a lie, I don?t know who told you that or maybe you saw two male dogs humping each other and took a mental note, but your wrong. Even if there is homosexuality in nature it doesn?t matter. You see we humans have something animals do not, that is a soul. We also have comprehension of things like god and right and wrong, a dog knows its wrong to crap on the carpet only because he has been taught that if he does he will receive punishment. We as humans have a conscience and know instinctively what is wrong and right. Getting back to the point, Here is what the Bible has to say about homosexuality,
"Do not lie with a man as one lies with a woman; that is detestable" (Leviticus 18:22) and
"If a man lies with a man as one lies with a woman, both of them have done what is detestable. They must be put to death; their blood will be on their own heads" (Leviticus 20:13) and
In the same way the men also abandoned natural relations with women and were inflamed with lust for one another. Men committed indecent acts with other men, and received in themselves the due penalty for their perversion" (Romans 1:26-27).
I don?t know how anyone in their right minds who would, after reading these passages think that homosexuality is acceptable.
Getting on with the next point,
<No, it doesn?t depend on how you view it. No matter how you look at it, it is still evil, >
What I mean is, sin is still sin, no matter how YOU look at it. Killing the Iraqis is not a sin because they are the ones who attacked us first. They funded terrorists that killed 2000 of our citizens, it might as well been Saddam flying the plane. It is now our right to avenge our dead. God also says that it is our obligation to stop evil around the world. And that is exactly what we are doing.
<The Iraqis were just minding their own business and then BAM here comes America with their big guns their banners of freedom and wealth. I cant help thinking that this country is slowly dying and the masses don?t give a damn, they are content to live their lives and stay out of other peoples business, what happens when the law is determined by your beliefs, there is a word for that its called ANARCHY!!>
This last statement was what liberals like yourself all around America are saying, <the Iraqis were just minding their own business and then BAM here comes America with their big guns their banners of freedom and wealth.> They don?t think we have the right to protect ourselves against terrorists, they say that it can all be ?Resolved? I say the only way to resolve this conflict is to dig out all the hiding Iraqi leaders from their little holes and then bury them again.
<I cant help thinking that this country is slowly dying and the masses don?t give a damn, they are content to live their lives and stay out of other peoples business,>
The average teenager doesn?t know anything about politics and are content to stay that way. They don?t know what?s really going on over in Iraq all they know is what they are fed. They take all they hear and believe it because they only get one side of the story. And that story doesn?t include morals or God, it says ?America is greedy and wants more oil and is masking it by saying that Iraq is a threat to our everyday life.? On a side note, if you don?t believe me go online and check any survey on what teens know about politics. Half of teens can?t even tell you who our vice president is. That is shameful.
ZZ66, next time get some proof to back up your arguments. If your going to bring up what God thinks about things then you better be able to back it up with his own words, also known as the Bible.
BETTER BUT STILL CACK
fuck off
That's why nixon started drinking scotch too.
I have no skills? Thankyou for your advice but I think that is a bit of a sweeping statement about my whole ability as a writer don't you think?
I know that this poem i9s not very good, I wrote it stoned off my face and simply put it on here to get some constructive advice. I knew that there was
a problem with the final image but i had a bit of a mental block and just shoved that line in at the end to give it
some temporary finishing line. You have previously commented positively on my poetry and so this barrage of (as I see it) not
quite insulting and borderline abuse comes as quite a shock. While your advice is somewhat useful several of the revised lines
that you suggested misunderstand the voice and theme of the poem. "I will walk your trail" suggests an image of
following someone's lifestyle, doing things in the same way that they do them where as it was supposed to get across a
sense of following, shadowing a person. I will continue to redraft this poem as is the only way to improve a piece
of work. Please remember that all art forms, including poetry are subjective. The notion of being 'skilled' surely is an objective claim
and cannot be legitimately applied to a subjective practice. Feel free to have that line you invented 'curled like an autumn leaf waiting to die' because a) it
would be totally incoherent as a similie in this poem and b) A curled autumn leaf would already be dead thus the image of it waiting to die would be nonsensical.
Finally, yes I do know what I'm talking about but the question is do you
Line five: Smoke
The rest: Good stuff.
this makes a good lyric
Perneum pushers. hilarious.
Scenes of full metal jacket emerged
hey, you deleted my comments. no fair.
you know, you can rhyme more than one syllable at a time; you can cross and slaqnt rhyme; you can get all kinds of complex patterns working, or you can thump away on the bass drum, like you did here. it might make the verse less clunky if you expanded your technique.
why do i have a problem with the wind carving snowflakes? it irritates me. i am such a realist. why can't i warp my mind around a logical twist? ugh.
anyway, i like it. but i think the strongest part is
"The important thing
is to cut the right wire
when defusing the time-bomb".
but then, i also think that that's a separate poem. the ideas aren't melded enough for me, in this poem's current state. hope that helps.
how we love to love the vampire.