poemranker ::20 most recent comments by klosterfobik (61-80) and replies

Comments byklosterfobik, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Dare by LintyWeenis 8 Sep 2004, 4:42 PM
Why is she/he screaming your name?
Is it the danger or the size of your penis?
on Forever Lasting by ChefKSP 8 Sep 2004, 4:37 PM
I found the hidden message!Is it you markedly suck?
Stick to cooking Chef KSP!
on Love by ChefKSP 8 Sep 2004, 4:32 PM
You'll never be talented,
You'll always ramble,
You'll want to become more than just a moron,
You'll feel better when you quit posting this crap.
on Lost Soul by ChefKSP 8 Sep 2004, 4:26 PM
No offence - but please try a different form of expression.Poetry is just not your cup of tea.
on Friend Ship by ChefKSP 8 Sep 2004, 4:22 PM
Are you for real?
replying on Disregardance by klosterfobik 8 Sep 2004, 3:30 PM
Silent Scream is such an easy oxymoron.
replying on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 8 Sep 2004, 3:10 PM
I know its an adverb but I just thought I'd try it as a noun,like daybreak,red-letter day,bygone or past...
seems more dramatic this way?Or not?
replying on Disregardance by klosterfobik 8 Sep 2004, 1:12 PM
I could always just self publish like yourself - Or am I mistaken?
replying on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 8 Sep 2004, 1:07 PM
Delicate was refers to a fleeting - fragile memory left behind by a girl in the form of a sweet odor,its delicate because if you tamper with it it will go away.Do you not even appriciate the
the scents of the women you've had?Like their perfume,lotion or shampoo?Sorry if its "cutesy".And as for affection your correct,as for Ben Harper-ish your very wrong.
replying on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 7 Sep 2004, 8:04 PM
Thanks.
replying on Inquietude by klosterfobik 7 Sep 2004, 5:49 PM
Thanks.
on Let your heart roam free by Leah11 2 Sep 2004, 7:33 PM
Like the feel and honesty - structure could be better.
-8.5-
on Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer 2 Sep 2004, 6:36 PM
Quite lame.
on Two Basic Forces by dougsoderstrom 1 Sep 2004, 7:38 PM
Is this poetry?
on Andrew by Spindle 28 Aug 2004, 9:16 PM
I look into his eyes and I'm tossed and bound
I bury my face into her breast and want to masterbate and live forever
I kiss her lips and pull away just so I can suck ass again.
replying on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik 28 Aug 2004, 7:39 PM
Just a grammatical pun - thought it rolled of the tongue quite well.My Grandma's name was Hazel - she was my childhood god.
She loved me so much but I kind of drifted from her.She died before I could tell her how much I cared about her.I did'nt lose
her - she lost me when I ran away.All my fault....that's why I'm sorry.
on Surfer by INTRANSIT 28 Aug 2004, 7:23 PM
Thought of back when and salt blue ocean....very nice.
on Internal Dialogue (Mental Cock-Slapping & Anal Discipline) by DreamerSupreme 28 Aug 2004, 7:19 PM
What is wrong with you?Was this an ode to yourself?
Either way it really - truly sucks!Are you a confused
13 year old who's been molested by a gang of Eagle Scouts?Try something besides poetry for your venting.
Considering this ranting poem,I believe your the mayor
of Dimsville!
replying on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik 27 Aug 2004, 10:21 PM
I'm sorry that was the best you could do - I forgive you lack of thought.
replying on Penumbra by klosterfobik 27 Aug 2004, 10:10 PM
Would it really matter if it was a pimple?