on Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun
28 Aug 2002, 12:39 AM
No, piss on.
on some deleted poem
13 Jun 2002, 4:09 PM
How are bagels Jewish? Dark_Angel quit being Jewish.
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
13 Jun 2002, 4:04 PM
I'll drink to that.
on Living Conditions by Christof
27 Nov 2002, 9:28 PM
This poem belongs in a nursery with other wreckless idiots who have no balls and spew shit from their mouths and asses whenever they see fit. This poem sucks. If you like it, you suck. Christof: grow some fucking balls before you to decide to piss in Microsoft Word, thanks.
on Work by poetandknowit
27 Nov 2002, 9:34 PM
Change your name to IFUCKINGSUCK. This reads like a pathetic proxy for a 2pac rap, mixed with some piss and shit you found lying in your stack of unpublished poems. If you pride yourself on this consider going through puberty, growing a pair, then writing about something that isn't bromidic. Oh, and get rid of the shit you use for fountain pens and the stale piss you use for ink. Thanks bitch,
Love ErgoErgun
Love ErgoErgun
on some deleted poem
25 Jul 2002, 8:38 PM
This is a gem (8).
on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
24 Jul 2002, 6:04 PM
You're into theatre? Have you checked out any of Sondheim's musical productions?
Oh, the poem... um... 6.
Oh, the poem... um... 6.
on Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun
20 Jul 2002, 9:19 AM
My inspiration seems to come in a variety of forms, some of which, like this piece, seem more in tune with this audience's tastes. If you liked this poem I'd advise you to take at what I just submitted entitled "Volkswagon." Thanks for your comments, it's nice to see something uplifting against the negative dribble people usually proffer.
on some deleted poem
16 May 2002, 9:22 AM
Rhyming might help the flow.
on Sloth and Expectation by ifni
16 May 2002, 9:23 AM
You could deliver such a profound idea in a more tasteful way.
on My Dark by crims0ngh0st
16 May 2002, 9:24 AM
Cut out the unecessary crap.
on some deleted poem
16 May 2002, 9:27 AM
Typical Dark Angel crap.
on Vigor Mortis by WarrenGDawg
16 May 2002, 9:30 AM
FUNNY AND PROVOCATIVE
on Volkswagon by ErgoErgun
28 Aug 2002, 3:12 AM
I enjoy your comments. What a wonderful relationship. =]
on Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined
16 May 2002, 9:26 AM
Interesting tone.
on The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8
12 Dec 2004, 4:27 PM
the catalogue serves the perspective to perfection