on The End by Caducus
13 Oct 2005, 9:35 AM
need to know last line of s4 - is it needed do you thibnk?
on Loss by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Oct 2005, 9:24 AM
still brings a tear to my eye
replying on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus
30 Sep 2005, 1:16 AM
We should twin cities.
on A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina
29 Sep 2005, 9:05 AM
You always grab my attention 2nd stanza opening 4 is very good. The ending seems laclustre but then i am over dramatic.
replying on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus
29 Sep 2005, 8:05 AM
Their is an open mic poetry night at the tin angel pub in coventry which is cool but feel disillusioned by where poetry isn't going. I've accepted I'm flawed but think you can make a better point with some poetry read aloud, for instance it can be more moving, funny, and reactions can be gauged which can change you as a writer.
For national poetry day my city which is home to Phillip Larkin (Coventry) has not got a single worthy thing planned around poetry.
Time for anarchy - well its that or the polish working mens club reading with no teeth.
Where do you plan to go with your writing?
For national poetry day my city which is home to Phillip Larkin (Coventry) has not got a single worthy thing planned around poetry.
Time for anarchy - well its that or the polish working mens club reading with no teeth.
Where do you plan to go with your writing?
replying on From Dust To Flesh To Texas by Caducus
24 Sep 2005, 4:11 AM
I agree but then this is a personal one unlike most of mine which are not.
My love life is a bit wonky and I'm not a great poet just honest and fucked up.
Thank you for reading.
My love life is a bit wonky and I'm not a great poet just honest and fucked up.
Thank you for reading.
replying on From Dust To Flesh To Texas by Caducus
24 Sep 2005, 4:08 AM
No proof of it I guess. Thanks for commenting
on Leaving Song by wilco
15 Sep 2005, 9:30 AM
I know line 3 its so true.
its a freakin classic and normally what i liked a couple of years ago isnt the same now (which can be said of some readers to my work). This is still so haunting and ripping out the guts of a grandfather clock shows your emotive qualities spilling over - this poem made me like you as a human and writer.
on Leaving the Woods House by zodiac
23 Aug 2005, 7:49 AM
I second what alchemy said and this is an awesome piece of writing - definitely in the top 10 I've read on here and elsewhere.
Last line should be tenderhooks
Last line should be tenderhooks
on Letter from Palermo by Caducus
23 Aug 2005, 6:16 AM
Dont you just love that name? Hows the road truckmeister?
on Storm Damage by Caducus
16 Aug 2005, 3:56 AM
God help me if Dark Angel sees this.
on Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8
9 Aug 2005, 8:04 AM
Retitle - 'Plug'
I'd chop off my scaramanga to see it.
I'd chop off my scaramanga to see it.
on Dying Abroad by zodiac
12 Jul 2005, 9:26 AM
Once I found out what a triolet is I'll come back.
on Butterfly Plague by zodiac
12 Jul 2005, 9:25 AM
The title sucked me in and this part I wish I'd written :
Here's a naked-necked girl laughing
in a square, thumbnail sawing an orange-skin.
There is more too but I'm out of it.
Here's a naked-necked girl laughing
in a square, thumbnail sawing an orange-skin.
There is more too but I'm out of it.
on Crack baby by Caducus
7 Jul 2005, 7:10 AM
FIXED !