on You Can by Dariana
17 Oct 2002, 11:48 AM
Tintagiles, you only like it so little after hearing me singing bits of it while quite tanked.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2002, 7:01 AM
damn good.
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 1:26 PM
Very nice. I'd like some more drunkenness in my life.
on The Thought Of It by Christof
16 Oct 2002, 7:32 AM
That's amazing. The fox reminded me of several disturbing childhood memories of a fur farm. Chilly.
on White Wasp Boy - La Senza Superhero by ==Doylum
16 Oct 2002, 7:30 AM
I'm grinning like a demon despite the mental image. clever.
on Midnight Dream by Katie
16 Oct 2002, 7:24 AM
It's funny at least. Sorry kitty, you don't write well enough to do too much for me. on the other hand, if anonymous online diddling with the morbidly obese Everquest player described by Dark Angel is what puts a smile on your face, who am I to judge?
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Oct 2002, 2:22 PM
Calm down, poetandwhatever. At your age you're liable to a heart attack.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 2:14 PM
I like waffles. especially magic ones. any unique properties to the syrup?
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Oct 2002, 2:16 PM
Fan-fookin-tastic. truly an epic for the ages. I enjoy it greatly.
on First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus
15 Oct 2002, 2:18 PM
A wise entity once said:" I vant to lick your girlfreind! Bweah!" I'm entertained.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2002, 6:54 AM
Absolutely brilliant. true. kicking ass, as always.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2002, 6:56 AM
Yikes, the genius. rockin' my socks as usual.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2002, 6:59 AM
that's just terrible. lose the "u" 's and read more. try new rhyme schemes.
on more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8
11 Oct 2002, 7:03 AM
quality porn poems. dirty in a wonderful way.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2002, 7:06 AM
pure cheese. typos and a crap rhythm make for a true literary dryheave.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2002, 7:09 AM
The virginity thing is idiotic. This is beyond sappy. This "right" and "wrong" thing is another thing you should work on. Your mother would be embarrassed.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2002, 7:13 AM
lean to spell. F-A-T-E, for starters." Fiery" flames, you mean. This "sin" thing worries me, though, kid. it really does. Trying to call forth angels is pretty fucking dumb. (calling forth anything isn't that bright really) As a poem though, it's pretty bad.