poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Robert K Foster (61-80) and replies

Comments byRobert K Foster, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Abortion by horus8 11 Jun 2003, 5:01 AM
I am confused, especially by the title. too much of a mystery for me on this one.
on Opera by ~incarnate~ 11 Jun 2003, 5:00 AM
7
7
7
too bad its not a slot machine.
on Mirror to Mirror by Roisin 11 Jun 2003, 4:41 AM
I like this very much, save the cliche' in the last line. you have talent. a solid 9.
replying on Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig 11 Jun 2003, 4:35 AM
curiosity--sorry about the typo.
replying on Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig 11 Jun 2003, 4:35 AM
You have aroused my curiousity and flattered me at the same time. which was it?
replying on 11th September (a senyru) by scitz 11 Jun 2003, 4:30 AM
you were right:

Jet fuels are produced mainly from straight-run [5] and hydrotreated kerosene [5A] or kerosene blended with heavy naphtha streams [4 and derived streams] from the atmospheric distillation of crude oil. Jet fuels are composed mainly of aliphatic and aromatic hydrocarbons with boiling ranges of 150-300 °C (kerosene type) and 45-280 °C (wide-cut type). The formulated products are used in turbine engines of civil and military aircraft. Exposures to jet fuel may occur during its production, transport and storage as well as during refuelling and maintenance of aircraft. Heavier exposures may occur during inspection and repair of aircraft wing tanks owing to the confined working space.

on Ouch by heroditus 10 Jun 2003, 9:51 AM
lose the commas.
on #16 by mikejedw 10 Jun 2003, 9:49 AM
Yes it would.
perhaps. a very zen-like poem. excellent job! 10 atrs
on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom 10 Jun 2003, 9:48 AM
the meaning of life revealed.
on "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus 10 Jun 2003, 9:47 AM
No I couldn't eat another bite. oh sir, it is only a wafer thin mint. it's wafer thein, oh, all right. munch grumble stretch BOOM!
on Handy Smurf by Bachus 10 Jun 2003, 9:46 AM
I love the smurf collection.
on Libra by Rex Karrs 10 Jun 2003, 9:46 AM
is this about kissing your mom?
on and the professor, too by bondjedi 10 Jun 2003, 9:44 AM
what about the gorilla?
on 11th September (a senyru) by scitz 10 Jun 2003, 9:40 AM
I'm not sure jet fuel is kerosene.
on A love of the midlands by ==Doylum 10 Jun 2003, 9:38 AM
5
8
5
an upstate new york area code, but not a haiku scheme.
on hah by xanthippe 10 Jun 2003, 9:36 AM
I was in a bizarre kite flying accident.
replying on one man opponent by chinstrap 10 Jun 2003, 9:35 AM
by that argument, he is a loser also. unfortunately the dichotomy has been lost in the silly tone of the last line.
on Snack for the Shameless by New Life Drug 10 Jun 2003, 9:34 AM
stomach
on The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit 10 Jun 2003, 9:30 AM
great concept, but redundant. you essentially say the same thing twice.
on Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig 10 Jun 2003, 9:29 AM
syllables?