| Re: The Ode that never was by Shardik |
24-Jan-03/11:01 PM |
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I demand that you tell me immediately who told you about the pirgayte LeChoadke? DAMN IT MAN...SPEAK! you obviously are trained at the art of poetry! and should be forced to dance 'the prawne shuffle'. _e_t_e bastard! i know that's you come out..ye..plagiarist..you stole my lyr....... cockeyed vandal.
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| Re: a comment on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 |
24-Jan-03/10:51 PM |
Thanks,
Here is the edited version
Masking Wyverns
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Monsoon shark god furious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday
It?s a shame I am that curious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
Fierce night howls paved the way
And the way it was deleterious
The love of my father, she snaked away
Children raced past our well-lit display
An unintentional metamorphosis
Watch me slave at words I could never say
A raven-haired woman asked, "was I okay?"
Lips crimson and voluptuous
The love of my father, she snaked away
A god of wind, a shark at play
Your past is not mysterious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
The love of my father, she snaked away.
because i know how you are about spelling
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| Re: mornings, january by <~> |
24-Jan-03/2:37 PM |
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chew it until thawed at work.
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| Re: The Other Side of Me by Quarton |
24-Jan-03/1:37 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Snowblind by horus8 |
24-Jan-03/1:26 AM |
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Tell you what sis...i'll keep that in mind, and make those changes to this haiku, if i include it in my competitive poetry manuscripts for this spring and summer's contests. thanks.
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| Re: a comment on The Ode that never was by Shardik |
23-Jan-03/1:18 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Hinged by Imperfections |
23-Jan-03/1:16 PM |
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| Re: nothing less by corinacorrie |
23-Jan-03/2:03 AM |
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But....Are you good looking?
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| Re: a comment on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8 |
23-Jan-03/12:15 AM |
jerky boys, second album.
First was way better.
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| Re: a comment on The plains of Africa by horus8 |
22-Jan-03/11:52 PM |
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It would if this had anything to do with Africa.
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| Re: The Crutchling by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
22-Jan-03/8:44 PM |
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| Re: Beyond Imagination by vulcan |
22-Jan-03/7:56 PM |
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i am going to feature your poetry tonight on my show me thinks.
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| Re: Maya by Reuben Spiteri |
22-Jan-03/7:49 PM |
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this is by far the worst poem i've read of yours, sorry...6f
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| Re: Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul |
22-Jan-03/7:47 PM |
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Have no fear..it's only a black out while eating at mcdonalds, feel that...there there...hold my mcnuggets.
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| Re: fork by Flattop |
22-Jan-03/7:46 PM |
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robert johnson you aint..
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| Re: It's something about you by devina |
22-Jan-03/7:42 PM |
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you always love the people that hate you the most. by the way..did you see where my frisbee landed?J
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| Re: Is it you by Katie |
22-Jan-03/7:40 PM |
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"I picture him, being you," hitchcock couldn't do it better.11!c
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| Re: Creativity. by Blue Magpie |
22-Jan-03/7:38 PM |
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The sole is a mysterious thing, but i feel that you have described it's 'meaningful' secrets properly.lol.?
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| Re: Remembering You by dalva |
22-Jan-03/7:35 PM |
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| Re: Thy Lovely Eyes by dalva |
22-Jan-03/7:28 PM |
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well it at least maintains a strong notion.
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