on Last Nightâs Dream (Freud-o-riffic) by razorgrin
4 Apr 2003, 3:53 PM
Eat less junk food.
on Prayer for Peace by razorgrin
4 Apr 2003, 3:50 PM
What War???
replying on We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2003, 5:52 PM
Alrighty then. Thanks for your opinion D.A. and your right I'm not disabled(other than mentally and as the above clearly defines Thats not good enough) and It wouldn't change my view point what so ever.
replying on We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2003, 1:46 PM
Oh. Yeah. To be honest I just wanted to play around With the edges of the screen. I could care less about the War really. It doesn't involve anyone close to me and barely affects me to date. Glad you like it tho.
replying on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2003, 1:38 PM
I'm trying to go with more medifores instead of just emoting all the time. I'm still working on this one tho cause I think that the meaning is just a little too deeply buried get thru.
replying on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Mar 2003, 2:01 PM
Thank you very much
The Caps. are just the first center and last word. I'll give it a title when I finish it but I like your Idea.
The Caps. are just the first center and last word. I'll give it a title when I finish it but I like your Idea.
on Guitar Lesson by Dancer
29 Mar 2003, 8:06 AM
Good Times, Good Times
on sorry, but i am lame by nolan
29 Mar 2003, 7:59 AM
Hmmm... Amazingly not too lame. In fact I ratter liked it. -9-
on Distant at best by Crakyamuni
29 Mar 2003, 7:55 AM
Huh? If? Wha? Nevermind confused. It seems to make sense to me but something is nagging at me about it. -10-
till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)
till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)
on Red Skies and Thunderflies by intheailse
29 Mar 2003, 7:50 AM
Alright Lyrics -7-
on Is This Love by intheailse
29 Mar 2003, 7:47 AM
Oh dear child. I had hoped I'd never have to explain this to anyone ever again. Its not love if you have to ask!! Not to mention you give no detail, nadda, none. This is for all intents and purposes a look at the thoughts inside a teenage adolesant mind. Your giving us shallow thoughts with nothing to base them on. No concept of a landscape inside your head or much less of the world around you. If this isn't the worst poem ever written I'll bet its close. -0-
on Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin
29 Mar 2003, 7:37 AM
Glad your working on new peversions but... I agree these aren't your best but I realise it must be a hard to come up unusal fetishes and five line ways to describe them. -8-
P.S. I know someone who can do the last one. He says it gives him a cramp in the neck.
P.S. I know someone who can do the last one. He says it gives him a cramp in the neck.
replying on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
29 Mar 2003, 7:09 AM
Your right. I was just looking at Exit most quiveringly Clean, and the Tunnel of Worm. I'm used to calling my bum an exit only and Do Not Enter. The Tunnel of Worm <-combined with the exit remark, Tape worms being defecated, and the fact that your fecal matter slowly crawls thru your body like a worm. I comepletely missed clit-feeding. My mistake.
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
27 Mar 2003, 5:31 PM
Tick Tock Tick Tock, The Ever Running Clock
At the chime It will be 7 o'clock
At the chime It will be 7 o'clock
on with no words to write (v2) by nentwined
27 Mar 2003, 5:17 PM
eh? Why not -6-
on Iterated Fuck by nentwined
27 Mar 2003, 5:15 PM
Ewww... I never I should have quit reading after the sex but no I thought there will be more sex and then I was like sweet a blow job but then Curiousity got the best of me Anal Ewww... this would be a 60 rounded down to 10 cause there is nothing higher than a 10 but you just lost 51 points for anal enjoy your 9
on you will feel by nentwined
27 Mar 2003, 5:02 PM
I must say I thought that was going to be good just from your first line but nope. Not really sure what went wrong but it ended up a trainwreck. -3-
on One More Mile by marvelis
25 Mar 2003, 7:20 PM
Marvelis you my be but I still doubt your Divinty -7-
on A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus
25 Mar 2003, 2:44 PM
Profound and thought provoking. Excellent -10-