regarding some deleted poem...	15-Dec-02/9:01 PM
thus spake the book of Ian, chapter 2, verse...uh...
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-02/12:22 PM
heheheh. 'nuff said.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Dec-02/10:01 PM
tee hee!
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Dec-02/8:55 PM
oh boy. guess i better repent, huh? HEY! p&k, horus, LOOK OUT! you'd better start saving up, because ol' briggsy here has got our number!
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Dec-02/6:19 PM
this is mythic. what does the title mean?
Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub	15-Dec-02/9:09 PM
fucking finally. thank you. one that's not pathetic. p.s.--like the titular device.
Re: can't by nentwined	18-Dec-02/7:27 AM
run! run! they're coming for you!
Re: UltraSound by UnityMitford	18-Dec-02/7:29 AM
so, it's a girl then? or is it a ==doylum?
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Dec-02/7:31 AM
no. sorry, i can't. i have no vocal cords. i think it's damn insensitive of you to post this. i just haven't been the same since, "The Accident."
Re: February Loneliness by BenRice	18-Dec-02/7:36 AM
what is the relationship of the retriever to the shooter?
Re: with no words to write by nentwined	17-Dec-02/11:01 AM
howzabout switching it to read thusly: spun wholecloth from ethers, the ethereal nothing
Re: Popaul by Nicholas Jones	17-Dec-02/11:03 AM
don't mind p&k. he gets cranky. i get bitchy. horus babbles. etc. keep posting. i don't know what popaul is. wanna tell me?
Re: killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) by nentwined	17-Dec-02/8:19 AM
damn. damn, damn damn. have a 10, for being so damn zen.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Dec-02/9:00 PM
i think you must be young. maybe not innocent. read more. forget him. (or her--whatever) think more. make comparisons mentally. then write. and if it's fluff, keep trying until it's not. as a point of reference, check out emily dickinson: http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html i think that's where you're aiming. and, keep trying. but think more than you write.
Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub	15-Dec-02/9:10 PM
oh, technically, still summer--10 days left, and whutnot. call me a pedant.
Re: A holiday warning by INTRANSIT	15-Dec-02/9:13 PM
why? you give no reason. will i be arrested for buying hot merch off the back of one? are they poorly driven? are they forming a new hybrid-gang--sort of a C.H.U.D. but rubber and metal? you must give flesh if you want grey to function. bones are not enough. your voice cannot be made out unless you speak. in complete thoughts.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Dec-02/7:51 AM
She became for a moment what Magdalene had all those years. had been? had, for all... this is unclear to me. also, sapphire. (2 p's) why did she become 'without a mouth'? she could not speak? she was unkissed? is that why she asked him to wait? a little more, a little more. you need minor tweaking to make this radiant.
Re: First Site by angel_uy	15-Dec-02/9:27 PM
check out emily dickinson: http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html i think that's where you're aiming. also, 'site' should be 'sight'. very different meanings.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-02/11:27 AM
the sea!
Re: killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined	17-Dec-02/8:19 AM
yeee-haw!