on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 9:01 PM
thus spake the book of Ian, chapter 2, verse...uh...
on some deleted poem
17 Dec 2002, 12:22 PM
heheheh. 'nuff said.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 10:01 PM
tee hee!
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 8:55 PM
oh boy. guess i better repent, huh? HEY! p&k, horus, LOOK OUT! you'd better start saving up, because ol' briggsy here has got our number!
on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2002, 6:19 PM
this is mythic.
what does the title mean?
what does the title mean?
on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
15 Dec 2002, 9:09 PM
fucking finally. thank you. one that's not pathetic.
p.s.--like the titular device.
p.s.--like the titular device.
on UltraSound by UnityMitford
18 Dec 2002, 7:29 AM
so, it's a girl then? or is it a ==doylum?
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 7:31 AM
no. sorry, i can't. i have no vocal cords. i think it's damn insensitive of you to post this.
i just haven't been the same since, "The Accident."
i just haven't been the same since, "The Accident."
on February Loneliness by BenRice
18 Dec 2002, 7:36 AM
what is the relationship of the retriever to the shooter?
on with no words to write by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 11:01 AM
howzabout switching it to read thusly:
spun wholecloth from ethers, the ethereal nothing
spun wholecloth from ethers, the ethereal nothing
on Popaul by Nicholas Jones
17 Dec 2002, 11:03 AM
don't mind p&k. he gets cranky. i get bitchy. horus babbles. etc. keep posting.
i don't know what popaul is. wanna tell me?
i don't know what popaul is. wanna tell me?
on killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 8:19 AM
damn. damn, damn damn. have a 10, for being so damn zen.
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 9:00 PM
i think you must be young. maybe not innocent. read more. forget him. (or her--whatever) think more. make comparisons mentally. then write. and if it's fluff, keep trying until it's not. as a point of reference, check out emily dickinson:
http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html
i think that's where you're aiming. and, keep trying. but think more than you write.
http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html
i think that's where you're aiming. and, keep trying. but think more than you write.
on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
15 Dec 2002, 9:10 PM
oh, technically, still summer--10 days left, and whutnot. call me a pedant.
on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT
15 Dec 2002, 9:13 PM
why? you give no reason. will i be arrested for buying hot merch off the back of one? are they poorly driven? are they forming a new hybrid-gang--sort of a C.H.U.D. but rubber and metal?
you must give flesh if you want grey to function. bones are not enough. your voice cannot be made out unless you speak. in complete thoughts.
you must give flesh if you want grey to function. bones are not enough. your voice cannot be made out unless you speak. in complete thoughts.
on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2002, 7:51 AM
She became for
a moment what Magdalene
had all those years.
had been?
had, for all...
this is unclear to me.
also, sapphire. (2 p's)
why did she become 'without a mouth'? she could not speak? she was unkissed? is that why she asked him to wait?
a little more, a little more. you need minor tweaking to make this radiant.
a moment what Magdalene
had all those years.
had been?
had, for all...
this is unclear to me.
also, sapphire. (2 p's)
why did she become 'without a mouth'? she could not speak? she was unkissed? is that why she asked him to wait?
a little more, a little more. you need minor tweaking to make this radiant.
on First Site by angel_uy
15 Dec 2002, 9:27 PM
check out emily dickinson: http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html i think that's where you're aiming.
also, 'site' should be 'sight'. very different meanings.
also, 'site' should be 'sight'. very different meanings.
on some deleted poem
17 Dec 2002, 11:27 AM
the sea!
on killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 8:19 AM
yeee-haw!