on A rock by nisim2
26 Jun 2008, 8:26 PM
The English of this piece is very awkward. Reads like a school assignment? Not sure you meant dolor or color (though both work about as well?) They end-rhymes (and near rhymes) feel very forced (and AABB tends to jump out as juvenile when reading something).
on If I Could by little_angel_maria
24 Jun 2008, 12:09 PM
This is by Sandra Lewis Pringle.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
24 Jun 2008, 12:08 PM
This anonymously authored poem appears to be older than this poster.
on love 2 by little_angel_maria
24 Jun 2008, 12:03 PM
Adding one word to a poem is not a significant change. This is "Realizing Love" by Richard Sheak.
replying on a limerick from kent by nentwined
13 Mar 2007, 12:26 PM
I honestly don't have a clue what I was doing here. I barely have a glimmer of memory of writing it. I'm sure there was a gimmick?
on The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
22 Feb 2007, 11:10 AM
Welcome back. :)
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717
19 Feb 2007, 4:16 PM
Maybe a nice quick lyric.
on Lying in the Snow, Crazy? Yes. by D. $ Fontera
19 Feb 2007, 4:15 PM
hmm.
on I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62
19 Feb 2007, 4:14 PM
die die die
on Cold Feet by gregsamsa222
19 Feb 2007, 4:04 PM
I really like this.
on The Plague of Being by D. $ Fontera
19 Feb 2007, 4:03 PM
eh
on Night High by LintyWeenis
19 Feb 2007, 4:02 PM
very interesting. nice flow, too.
on Coward has a tail by LintyWeenis
19 Feb 2007, 4:01 PM
cute. :)
on The Reason by frdup717
19 Feb 2007, 3:55 PM
ow.
on A Dance by D. $ Fontera
19 Feb 2007, 3:55 PM
cute; I can't quite make sense of it but I like what's there.
on An Arrow and a Knife by blues
19 Feb 2007, 3:54 PM
interesting.
on IT All Starts With My Fears by tisa7
19 Feb 2007, 3:53 PM
A list of your fears might be more interesting.
on A Mothers Heart by TAMARAG67
19 Feb 2007, 3:52 PM
ack